Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Still laughing about this one. Sounds like me at times when I lay my knife down and fail to look in my other pocket.
Well done. Still laughing at ourselves.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020

It's good to laugh at ourselves. I do it before anyone else can. hahaha. Thanks so much, Ben.

Comment from Loren .

Excellent

Tho had me smiling and even squinting to help you find what you were looking for. But, alas I didn't know what was lost. Sigh, I'm glad you found it. In a way, I can identify as I used to do needle point. Loren

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020

Good for you. We have a man here in Little Rock who used to make quilts. I love quilting, too. I was being silly here, but thanks for reviewing it.

Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel

Excellent

ha ha ha! What an interesting twist! You must embroider. :-) I really like this line because it so clearly describes what I face every time I try to find something:
"some place I've not looked
but took for granted where it was not."
Yes, I think I know where it's NOT, but that's usually a wrong assumption!
Well done! I really enjoyed your poem!

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020

Thank you so much. I'm glad I gave you a laugh. I was feeling silly today. 8-)
Yvonne