A Frantic Search
Free Verse23 total reviews
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
How cute and clever. It seemed like such an important task, searching and searching for that something??? I'm sure you have a winner there. Good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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How cute and clever. It seemed like such an important task, searching and searching for that something??? I'm sure you have a winner there. Good luck.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
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Thank you for reviewing my free verse. Sorry for my late reply. Yvonne
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, A Frantic Search, takes a fairly small event and finds the anxiety, mystery, and sense of accomplishment in its successful completion. Nice.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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This free verse, A Frantic Search, takes a fairly small event and finds the anxiety, mystery, and sense of accomplishment in its successful completion. Nice.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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I'm happy you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! I knew it had to be something we may not guess... I did, at first, think it was your glasses (I do that sometimes) or even my glass of tea!! ;) LOL! ;) Thanx so much for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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LOL!! I knew it had to be something we may not guess... I did, at first, think it was your glasses (I do that sometimes) or even my glass of tea!! ;) LOL! ;) Thanx so much for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your great review. I look for my glasses a lot. lol
Comment from JLR
A fun graphic that binds the poem to the challenge well and although not a needle and thread kind of guy, my grandma was so I do understand and evoke a smile, thank you.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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A fun graphic that binds the poem to the challenge well and although not a needle and thread kind of guy, my grandma was so I do understand and evoke a smile, thank you.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Ha ha, thank you for your great review.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start and was surprise you were so serious to find the matching color to go with you embroidery
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start and was surprise you were so serious to find the matching color to go with you embroidery
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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It's a serious matter. lol. Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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It was my pleasure
Cookie
Comment from aryr
This was great reading and a wonderful free verse. I liked the way you used the word 'match' to relate to your embroidery thread. I probably would have used it as a stick match, not even thinking about matching it to something. Very creative and very well done.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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This was great reading and a wonderful free verse. I liked the way you used the word 'match' to relate to your embroidery thread. I probably would have used it as a stick match, not even thinking about matching it to something. Very creative and very well done.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you. I'm glad you thought so.
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You are so welcome, Yvonne. A quick question if I may. Did you change your picture?
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I did, but I'm seeing the same one of my garden area.
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Okay well I am seeing a smiling, beautiful face.
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Thank you.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is an excellent posting for the Free Verse Club--vividly descriptive, with strong word choices, lighthearted, and delightful. Though not gifted at anything involving needlework, I appreciate those with those talents.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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This is an excellent posting for the Free Verse Club--vividly descriptive, with strong word choices, lighthearted, and delightful. Though not gifted at anything involving needlework, I appreciate those with those talents.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Janice.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about finding to the best co!or of yarn to match the rest of the completed embroidery picture that will blend in with the rest of the yarn.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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A very well-written free verse poem about finding to the best co!or of yarn to match the rest of the completed embroidery picture that will blend in with the rest of the yarn.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from LaRosa
I was drawn into the poem immediately with the emotional words: Frantic,
running hither and yon
searching,
seeking.
Peering and squinting
to no avail so far.
The ending was fun and surprising as my weird mind ran in an opposite direction from the mundane world. Immediately my world gleaned the parental sense of urgency over a child's life lost in a messy world and the need to find the answer that saves.
That's what I am learning to enjoy about poetry. There can be a world of intent and meaning and often on different levels. Betcha didn't expect someone to go so far off your mark, huh. But that's why it's so good. I could, and I could still feel your emotional pull.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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I was drawn into the poem immediately with the emotional words: Frantic,
running hither and yon
searching,
seeking.
Peering and squinting
to no avail so far.
The ending was fun and surprising as my weird mind ran in an opposite direction from the mundane world. Immediately my world gleaned the parental sense of urgency over a child's life lost in a messy world and the need to find the answer that saves.
That's what I am learning to enjoy about poetry. There can be a world of intent and meaning and often on different levels. Betcha didn't expect someone to go so far off your mark, huh. But that's why it's so good. I could, and I could still feel your emotional pull.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review.
Comment from Pantygynt
A clever response to the challenge complete with a red herring matchstick man in the illustration to lead us up the garden path, as we made our way down the lines of free verse (with some skilful cross rhyming too) until you matched your thread at the end. Very clever.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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A clever response to the challenge complete with a red herring matchstick man in the illustration to lead us up the garden path, as we made our way down the lines of free verse (with some skilful cross rhyming too) until you matched your thread at the end. Very clever.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!
