The Reconstructer
Be your own conductor2 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed your story within a poem. Your rhyme schemes were very well-crafted and thought out. Many emotions were expressed and the events unfolded quite well in your poetic descriptions. This was a creative and imaginative entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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I really enjoyed your story within a poem. Your rhyme schemes were very well-crafted and thought out. Many emotions were expressed and the events unfolded quite well in your poetic descriptions. This was a creative and imaginative entry for the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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I?m glad that you liked it. Thanks for the review.
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I?m glad that you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
I read this poem with breakneck speed out loud. It became very staccato, rap-like. The losing of one-self comes forward very convincingly, but also the surprising power to regain strength to survive.
Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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I read this poem with breakneck speed out loud. It became very staccato, rap-like. The losing of one-self comes forward very convincingly, but also the surprising power to regain strength to survive.
Well done!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem.
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem.
