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Garden of Peace

A Tetractys for the contest

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the Tetractys Contest writing prompt. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Attractive presentation.

The topic is interesting...I like the peace rose. Great imagery.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Such a beautiful rose - wish it could have been shared by others! :) ;) A great employment of the Tetractys form here! :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from equestrik
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This is a gorgeous rose! Perfect. I enjoyed your description of it and what kind of rose it is. Your write and the photo are beautiful. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Tetractys about the beautiful rise in your garden that flourish despite the virus that keep us all out of circulation to stay safe and stop the spread of the virus.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I think our gardens and wildlife in general has benefited from the effects of the virus, there is less pollution in the air and nature has thrived, I enjoyed your roses, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    I agree. Always nice to hear your thoughts!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a lovely entry for the Tetractys Contest writing prompt. I enjoyed this poem very muck. I hope does well in the contest. Best of luck to you!

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much!
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 18-Sep-2020
    You're very welcome!
Comment from zanya
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What a beautiful name for a rose and what an exquisite rose - shining in all its glory -gardens can be havens of peace for us these pandemic days -thanks for sharing and lifting our spirits !

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    I?m happy you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by to share your encouraging feedback.
Comment from eliz100
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First off, I am new at this, but I would you check line 3 syllable count. Does the ED on flourished count as a syllable. I like your message connecting the rose to covid. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    The last line is supposed to have 10 syllables- I believe that?s what I have written, but I will double check.
Comment from AnnieDawn
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I really love this contest as there are so many good entries and this one is really good. I like the theme and always enjoy nature and also spiritual. The picture is beautiful and compliments your entry. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Lovely rose--beautiful name too--thanks for note and pic--uplifting verse--flower defies virus that haunts humans. Peace triumphs over Corona! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much for sharing your encouraging thoughts!