Peace
Will we ever truly give it a chance?4 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Browsing your portfolio, I found many of your poems I'd missed and wanted to review. You and me by the waters hoping for calmer seas. A fine offering and six starfish to bless you today.
Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sal XOs...xo....
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
Browsing your portfolio, I found many of your poems I'd missed and wanted to review. You and me by the waters hoping for calmer seas. A fine offering and six starfish to bless you today.
Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sal XOs...xo....
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for the starfish and comments. Apprecite them and you very much. Blessings.
Faye
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You are very welcome, dearest Faye. A wonderful poem in a new form for me. I'll have to try it. Sal XOs....
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I don't write many of them, though I am working on increasing my formats. Appreciate you taking the time to read it.
As always xx's and oo's,
Faye
Comment from Y. M. Roger
As it is now so it always has been ... and shall be forever, I fear... :) ;) A great employment of the Tetractys form here! :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
As it is now so it always has been ... and shall be forever, I fear... :) ;) A great employment of the Tetractys form here! :) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Truly appreciate the comments and rating. Thank you ever so much for the review.
Comment from zanya
Yes it's so elusive to us humans -peace- perhaps we don't foster it sufficiently when we do manage to achieve thanks for sharing & the lovely art work
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
Yes it's so elusive to us humans -peace- perhaps we don't foster it sufficiently when we do manage to achieve thanks for sharing & the lovely art work
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your comments and rating. Appreciate your review.
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed this poem. I think the image you use of trying to contain the sea is a really good one, especially as you can always maintain a little of it, but not the whole thing. In the same way you can retain a bit of peace or love of peace but retaining the whole thing all the time is impossible. Thanks for sharing this
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
I enjoyed this poem. I think the image you use of trying to contain the sea is a really good one, especially as you can always maintain a little of it, but not the whole thing. In the same way you can retain a bit of peace or love of peace but retaining the whole thing all the time is impossible. Thanks for sharing this
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for taking your time to review it, along with your comments and ratings. Much appreciated.