Hazy Peach Sunset
5/7/5 Winter Haiku16 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku about the hazy peach sunset over the icy water of the lake where the flamingo hangs out and show off his reflection in the water.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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A very well-written haiku about the hazy peach sunset over the icy water of the lake where the flamingo hangs out and show off his reflection in the water.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate you took the time to read my poem.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Hola Marival, Me encantaba ese haiku. It's beautiful with such wonderful imagery. Thank you for the notes. I learn from the and have over time, and I hope many more will as well. UUn abrazo, Ulla xx
La situacion es muy mal aqui en Espana. Demasiados casos. Cuidate!!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Hola Marival, Me encantaba ese haiku. It's beautiful with such wonderful imagery. Thank you for the notes. I learn from the and have over time, and I hope many more will as well. UUn abrazo, Ulla xx
La situacion es muy mal aqui en Espana. Demasiados casos. Cuidate!!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Hola Ulla, aqui tambien esta muy mala la situacion. Cuidate! Beistos.
Thank you very much for the review and kind words.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Such a beautiful choice of words. Hazy peace sunset over lakes icy water. Beautiful visual with flamingo and its reflection in water. Very beautiful scene. Good work.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Such a beautiful choice of words. Hazy peace sunset over lakes icy water. Beautiful visual with flamingo and its reflection in water. Very beautiful scene. Good work.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Peace,
Gypsy
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from June Sargent
Now this is what I really enjoy - seeing birds in their natural surroundings. Flamingoes, herons, egrets and swans reflect a sense of peace and serenity. Alone with their thoughts...
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Now this is what I really enjoy - seeing birds in their natural surroundings. Flamingoes, herons, egrets and swans reflect a sense of peace and serenity. Alone with their thoughts...
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Peace,
Gypsy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, Gypsy.
-I didn't know flamingos could
survive in colder weather.
-A well written haiku that
meets all of the requirements.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery,
a good topic, and very good
satori line.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation, Gypsy.
-I didn't know flamingos could
survive in colder weather.
-A well written haiku that
meets all of the requirements.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery,
a good topic, and very good
satori line.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Peace,
Gypsy
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very well written and very well worded haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Gypsy, This is a very well written and very well worded haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love, Teri
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Peace,
Gypsy
Comment from Mark Schardine
hazy peach sunset
over lake's icy water --
flamingo reflects
Much like a painter, a poet must seek to capture colors from a fleeting moment, and present them.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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hazy peach sunset
over lake's icy water --
flamingo reflects
Much like a painter, a poet must seek to capture colors from a fleeting moment, and present them.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your 5-7-5 haiku with its double entenre in "reflects" that is so perfectly demonstrated in the picture you selected as well. Here's to millions more years of flamingos.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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I admired your 5-7-5 haiku with its double entenre in "reflects" that is so perfectly demonstrated in the picture you selected as well. Here's to millions more years of flamingos.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Gloria ....
And there we have an entirely different take on the flamingo. I must say while both are nice, i much prefer the lake reflecting the bird's image.
Excellent haiku and many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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And there we have an entirely different take on the flamingo. I must say while both are nice, i much prefer the lake reflecting the bird's image.
Excellent haiku and many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, that flamingo does look like he's in deep thought. But you also make a pun with the "reflects" as the water is reflecting that beautiful bird. Lovely haiku and picture!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Ah, that flamingo does look like he's in deep thought. But you also make a pun with the "reflects" as the water is reflecting that beautiful bird. Lovely haiku and picture!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much, Helen.
Hugs
