Passing Through
Birth, life, death48 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
An absolutely excellent poem especially as it is written in such a specific form. I enjoyed it immensely and this is marvelous well done superb kindest regards M:)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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An absolutely excellent poem especially as it is written in such a specific form. I enjoyed it immensely and this is marvelous well done superb kindest regards M:)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Meia, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this poem, have a great weekend!
Comment from royowen
It seems like a very poignant and sad poem, as an entry in this contest, very good and also very relevant a lesson to all those who relate to life such as it is, good rhyming, and a excellently scribed entry, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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It seems like a very poignant and sad poem, as an entry in this contest, very good and also very relevant a lesson to all those who relate to life such as it is, good rhyming, and a excellently scribed entry, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Roy, thank you kindly.
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Most welcome
Comment from Minglement
This is an interesting entry for the Minute poem contest. I've never tried this poem form and find it daunting, but you managed it effectively. Your poem has an ethereal quality to it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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This is an interesting entry for the Minute poem contest. I've never tried this poem form and find it daunting, but you managed it effectively. Your poem has an ethereal quality to it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on this poem, have a great weekend!
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading this introspective verse and feel your use of yourself as a topic was well chosen. Great job on the rhyme choices and the artwork that is very complimentary. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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I enjoyed reading this introspective verse and feel your use of yourself as a topic was well chosen. Great job on the rhyme choices and the artwork that is very complimentary. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Smiling back!
Comment from DeboraDyess
What an interesting Minuet Poem!I love the theme and the internal rhymes - it makes it whimsical and fun.
I didn't see any errors in SPAG, so I believe you're good to go!
Best in the contest and blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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What an interesting Minuet Poem!I love the theme and the internal rhymes - it makes it whimsical and fun.
I didn't see any errors in SPAG, so I believe you're good to go!
Best in the contest and blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Deb, thanks much! I love the blessing and one right back at you!
Comment from Laurie Holding
I loved the artwork you chose for your Minute poem, and your stanzas all made perfect sense. I'm a Frost fan, so of course this harkened back to him for me, an always welcome respite. Nice work, and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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I loved the artwork you chose for your Minute poem, and your stanzas all made perfect sense. I'm a Frost fan, so of course this harkened back to him for me, an always welcome respite. Nice work, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Laurie, I do so value your validation and thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
Comment from WriterHeather
Wow, this looks like a difficult poem to format. Excellent work! I love how you have chronicled birth to death in such a short verse. And in the end death was just another journey and freeing
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Wow, this looks like a difficult poem to format. Excellent work! I love how you have chronicled birth to death in such a short verse. And in the end death was just another journey and freeing
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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I reap the benefit of smiling at your wise comment, thank you and enjoy your weekend to its fullest and highest possibilities.
Comment from Mastery
I lie the originality of this poetry, author. Each phase of life handled poetically is something seldom thought of, I believe. It flows so well from beginning to end. :) Bob
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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I lie the originality of this poetry, author. Each phase of life handled poetically is something seldom thought of, I believe. It flows so well from beginning to end. :) Bob
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Bob, thanks have a nice weekend!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You've gone through your life in a minute! Lol. That was clever and very well done. The minute form is fun, I've written a few, but my last one was a minute and sixty seconds, I wrote four stanzas! I think yours is a strong contest entry, it's unique. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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You've gone through your life in a minute! Lol. That was clever and very well done. The minute form is fun, I've written a few, but my last one was a minute and sixty seconds, I wrote four stanzas! I think yours is a strong contest entry, it's unique. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Sandra, I am impressed and I do value the good wishes, thank you!
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You are very welcome! :))
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem for the minute contest
true to the form in rhymes and syllables.
The meter, however, should be iambic, unstressed/stress.
Some of the four syllable lines are not iambic
such as lines 2,3,4 6.
Otherwise well done with a good theme.
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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This is an excellent poem for the minute contest
true to the form in rhymes and syllables.
The meter, however, should be iambic, unstressed/stress.
Some of the four syllable lines are not iambic
such as lines 2,3,4 6.
Otherwise well done with a good theme.
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thanks
