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More Rioting in Tennessee

Humorous 50 Word Story Contest Entry

5 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This humorous fifty-word story, More Rioting in Tennessee, has the required word count and sends the current 'mad about everything' scenarios to yet another level. Funny.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Bill. I really appreciate the stars, friend. Yeah, I just had to throw this silliness into the mix of what people are rioting over these days. lol Thanks again.

    Ron
Comment from Laurie Holding
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Nice to see some humor comes of the madness in this world, right? I loved your work on the art, and playing with Fox News is a favorite game around my house. So thank you, you have my vote, and I wish you good luck!

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much for the great review and support, Laurie. Yes, we all need some humor through all this. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great weekend.

    =]
    Ron
Comment from Paul Borders
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You gotta win this one. Something's wrong if you don't. I'm going to round up all the fat debbies I can find and have them join this site and vote for their poem.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Paul. No, old jokes and old people BS is what wins contests around here. Most folks on here don't get or like my twisted sense of humor for some reason. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great weekend.
Comment from Sanku
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So do they want to rename the product to 'Fat debbie snacks?'Or they mean that the snacks are not exclusively for the littles ..Anyway you have said much im fifty words .All the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Sanku. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from LisaMay
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Those darn fat Debbies, eating up all the Little Debbie snack cakes then boycotting the headquarters. Huh! We know they've stashed all the products to eat later! Funny story.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    Haha. Yeah, those pigs. How dare them.

    Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this stupid piece. I changed the picture if you might be interested.
    Have a great day.

    =]