Windows of the Soul
When we lose sight of each other.14 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Good depiction of sadness expressed here. We are both miserable when you do look at me its plain to see our love has been spent. I mirror your clouded discontent. Excellent visual to go with your words. Well done.
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Good depiction of sadness expressed here. We are both miserable when you do look at me its plain to see our love has been spent. I mirror your clouded discontent. Excellent visual to go with your words. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I know these feelings and could identify with your words, when the love had gone then we only have sorrow and can never get it back no matter how hard we look, love Dolly x
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I know these feelings and could identify with your words, when the love had gone then we only have sorrow and can never get it back no matter how hard we look, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from Oscar J. Perez
What a beautifully haunting poem about a relationship that's not about to last for eternity. Your message was conveyed perfectly and I felt your pain in your words.
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What a beautifully haunting poem about a relationship that's not about to last for eternity. Your message was conveyed perfectly and I felt your pain in your words.
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(pane s/b pain--unless you mean window pane vs pain in the neck) Poignant--fresh and powerful imagery--straightforward presentation--a welcome change from the obscure! Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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(pane s/b pain--unless you mean window pane vs pain in the neck) Poignant--fresh and powerful imagery--straightforward presentation--a welcome change from the obscure! Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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I meant both, so I spelled it like that so people would notice and make the connection... just like you did.
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Nice!
