Jacko And The Thunder Box
(573 words) The sound of thunder brings back memories.22 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
This may well be a winner--wickedly clever--what a graphic twist--Such a scatological mind! However did you come up with this doozy of defecation? Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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This may well be a winner--wickedly clever--what a graphic twist--Such a scatological mind! However did you come up with this doozy of defecation? Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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The Aussie slang for a toilet got me going - thunder box. ... the prompt being titled "Thunderous Days".
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Leave it to you to make the connection!
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As you pointed out, I do have a scatological mind.
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Better scatological than scattered and illogical--all too prevalent, alas.
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Too true.... there's a lot of shit out there.
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crap-n-pap
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turds for words
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This has all the makings of a tall tale, or else a really funny story. What a different take on being stuck outside, ha ha. The reader is now privy to the privy, and all the dangers it contains during a thunderstorm. I like the humor that is both exaggerated and under-stated, depending on the sentence.
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This has all the makings of a tall tale, or else a really funny story. What a different take on being stuck outside, ha ha. The reader is now privy to the privy, and all the dangers it contains during a thunderstorm. I like the humor that is both exaggerated and under-stated, depending on the sentence.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
