Mind and the sea.
6 word poem18 total reviews
Comment from Debra Franze
Nice 6 word poetry very hard to do and project some meaning. You did it! Very creative well done poem. I like it! Congratulations on the ribbon.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Nice 6 word poetry very hard to do and project some meaning. You did it! Very creative well done poem. I like it! Congratulations on the ribbon.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from L. Kalere
It took a few seconds for me to get this, but then there was an "aha" moment. So much meaning in so few words.. worthy of high praise. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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It took a few seconds for me to get this, but then there was an "aha" moment. So much meaning in so few words.. worthy of high praise. Best of luck.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Mastery
Hello, my friend. You certainly made good use of the six words allowed, Your use of very strong verbs made this a wonderful, image-laden write. Good luck with it. :) Bob
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hello, my friend. You certainly made good use of the six words allowed, Your use of very strong verbs made this a wonderful, image-laden write. Good luck with it. :) Bob
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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hello Bob .Thank you very much .I see that you have started a new novel I am hoping to read it from the beginning.After a very long time i took a peek into this site and saw that your novel was in 8th or ninth chapter.Trying to organise my time...
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Hello Stranger :) Posting chapter fourteen this week. Bob
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Hello Stranger :) Posting chapter fourteen this week. Bob
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry. The image is perfect for your well-chosen 5 words. I like the comparison of the waves and mind both bringing up debris.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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You did a good job with your contest entry. The image is perfect for your well-chosen 5 words. I like the comparison of the waves and mind both bringing up debris.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from mermaids
Your short poem creates a clear picture of nature and also evokes feelings from the reader. The image of debris at the shore, specifically debris from the sea, brings up images and thoughts. Excellent use of descriptive words.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Your short poem creates a clear picture of nature and also evokes feelings from the reader. The image of debris at the shore, specifically debris from the sea, brings up images and thoughts. Excellent use of descriptive words.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem about the ocean waves and the thoughts in our minds both draw debris that is heaping up and are difficult to get rid of if we don't clean if regularly.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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A very well-written six-word poem about the ocean waves and the thoughts in our minds both draw debris that is heaping up and are difficult to get rid of if we don't clean if regularly.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image, Sanku,
and good presentation.
-You have used your
six words well with
a good topic and imagery.
-The message is an
important one, too-
a cluttered mind
will attract more debris,
and crash like the waves.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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-Very nice image, Sanku,
and good presentation.
-You have used your
six words well with
a good topic and imagery.
-The message is an
important one, too-
a cluttered mind
will attract more debris,
and crash like the waves.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Than you very much .
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Few words that resonate with me as my mind is often filled with things I would rather forget but my thoughts won't let me as they are also attached to my feel emotions, I enjoyed your 6 worder here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Few words that resonate with me as my mind is often filled with things I would rather forget but my thoughts won't let me as they are also attached to my feel emotions, I enjoyed your 6 worder here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.It is very much my own experience .And I struggle to get rid of it.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have done a great job of choosing your words; they convey a powerful message. Your comparison is very clear to me! I think of how, when I brood on and on, my thoughts become NOT more lucid, but like the debris you speak of.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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You have done a great job of choosing your words; they convey a powerful message. Your comparison is very clear to me! I think of how, when I brood on and on, my thoughts become NOT more lucid, but like the debris you speak of.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Nice 6 word poem. Awesome photo as well. Heaving waves brooding minds draw debris. Mother Nature with its power bring many beautiful treasure to shore. I like this.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Nice 6 word poem. Awesome photo as well. Heaving waves brooding minds draw debris. Mother Nature with its power bring many beautiful treasure to shore. I like this.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much
