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Autumn Glory, Winter Beauty

use these words writing prompt

10 total reviews 
Comment from angel123
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I enjoyed reading your nature poem. It flows well with your descriptive imagination. Your artwork choice goes well with your message of Autumn's Glory and Beauty. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Dear angel, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Use These Words Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Dear Rebecca V. thank you for your comments and review. Dove
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 19-Sep-2020
    You're always welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello anonymous

Nice entry for the Use These Words writing prompt contest.

You incorporated the words onto your story in a way that makes sense.

The topic is imagistic wintery scene.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Dear Gypsy, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about Autumn leading us into winter when the first leaves fall with colorful array in all her glory, but the winter's beauty is in its snow covered fields and chimney fires.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    Dear Sandra, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Between the autumn and the winter, lays:'Leaves of russet-gold fire Crackling ice
Burning cold like tongues of fire
Sunset strikes like a match's flare " Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
    Dear Iza, thank you for your comments and review
Comment from zanya
Exceptional
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A wonderful autumn /winter tableau delineated here, effectively incorporating the required words - full of color and sensual experience - great pic to illustrate

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
    Dear zanya, thanks again for your exceptional rating
Comment from royowen
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A lovely entry in this, "use these words" contest, you've covered the conditions most admirably, and written a most worthy entry as well, you've done an excellent job on this, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
    Dear Roy, thank you for your comments and review.
reply by royowen on 15-Sep-2020
    Most welcome
Comment from equestrik
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There is a lot of creativity here and I enjoyed the way you incorporated the four required words. Really nice descriptions which bring the reader right into a cold winter feeling. The picture is perfect.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
    Dear equestrik, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is beautiful writing that is very descriptive. And uses the given words quite well. I like leaves of russet gold fire. Ice cold spreading slowly through the air. Crisp winds taking my breath. Very well put together. I can see myself in this beautiful scene.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
    Dear Joanne, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very nice and well written poem you have penned using the specific words from the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive sentences and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Teri

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
    Dear Teri, thank you for your comments and review.