Ghost Story
A haunting17 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That sounds like an eerie place where this ghost lurks and this vengeful spirit lives in the minds of the local people and brings fear upon the town, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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That sounds like an eerie place where this ghost lurks and this vengeful spirit lives in the minds of the local people and brings fear upon the town, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. It's always a pleasure to hear from you.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Enjoyed your story
It was well written and kept my interest.
Using just those four words can end in using a a too simple a poem but you took it to a higher well done level.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Enjoyed your story
It was well written and kept my interest.
Using just those four words can end in using a a too simple a poem but you took it to a higher well done level.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is such a unique take on the writing prompt that truly gave me chills. So skillfully written as well. I suspect this will do very well in the contest! Good Luck!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This is such a unique take on the writing prompt that truly gave me chills. So skillfully written as well. I suspect this will do very well in the contest! Good Luck!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you for being awesome and giving me this wonderful review
Comment from zanya
A wonderful sense of mystique and fear pervade this story in a poem incorporating the words required for the contest -thanks for sharing and who knows where ghosts may appear ?
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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A wonderful sense of mystique and fear pervade this story in a poem incorporating the words required for the contest -thanks for sharing and who knows where ghosts may appear ?
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this great review. October is coming, so who knows what happens on Halloween? :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
A wonderful story in a poem about the ghost of the lady who died in the woods. Excellent rhyming and meter. Your creative imagery in describing the circumstances is fantastic.
Nice use of chosen words for the contest.
Good luck in the booths, this should do very well.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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A wonderful story in a poem about the ghost of the lady who died in the woods. Excellent rhyming and meter. Your creative imagery in describing the circumstances is fantastic.
Nice use of chosen words for the contest.
Good luck in the booths, this should do very well.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I do appreciate it. :)
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a great response to the writing prompt. It is a story within a poem, and it tells a somewhat romantic ghost tale. The words flow nicely and the rhymes work well.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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This is a great response to the writing prompt. It is a story within a poem, and it tells a somewhat romantic ghost tale. The words flow nicely and the rhymes work well.
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Good rhyming poem. The ghost story holds all the required words, is extensive, tells a haunting story of an abandoned wife who tries to follow her beloved husband, but in the woods she has a fatal accident and dies frozen to death. Since that day she roams the woods as a ghost and the people are afraid of the woods now.
Good story, well told and beautifully rhymed.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Good rhyming poem. The ghost story holds all the required words, is extensive, tells a haunting story of an abandoned wife who tries to follow her beloved husband, but in the woods she has a fatal accident and dies frozen to death. Since that day she roams the woods as a ghost and the people are afraid of the woods now.
Good story, well told and beautifully rhymed.
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my poem. :)
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very welcome.
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