Red Roses
My Nonet for the Nines!22 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, my dear Lady Sal, I do believe this one exposes that romantic music streak in you - wink, wink! ;) A lovely nonet for the 19th and always good for a tear of happiness - thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Oh, my dear Lady Sal, I do believe this one exposes that romantic music streak in you - wink, wink! ;) A lovely nonet for the 19th and always good for a tear of happiness - thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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You are such a dear and my Nonet comrade. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the wonderful review and kind compliments.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.....
Comment from Tina Crute
Sally, I am not giving you this because you are a dear friend, but because it touched my heart, and that is what love poems should do! I will bookcase this for sure!
Keep it up, sweet Sally. Your talent has no limit, apparently!
Hugs,
Tina
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Sally, I am not giving you this because you are a dear friend, but because it touched my heart, and that is what love poems should do! I will bookcase this for sure!
Keep it up, sweet Sally. Your talent has no limit, apparently!
Hugs,
Tina
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the six "roses"and generous compliments, dear Tina. I am honored and blessed that you enjoyed it. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your day,
Sally XOs....xo....
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"Roses", I like that! You never cease to amaze me with your creative words, that come in many forms:)
Tina
Comment from fm wright
What a beautiful way to tell a person that you love them. I especially love the roses since the Kentucky Derby is known as "the run for the roses." Anyway, it flows well and leaves one with a warm feeling.The photo and video really add the perfect touch.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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What a beautiful way to tell a person that you love them. I especially love the roses since the Kentucky Derby is known as "the run for the roses." Anyway, it flows well and leaves one with a warm feeling.The photo and video really add the perfect touch.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review and starshine, dear Faye. I'm glad you enjoyed my Nonet. My husband loves to give me roses and this was written for him. I think it would be safe to say, I am a hopeless romantic.
Sending my best today as always, and blessings for your day.
Sally XOs.....xo......
Comment from lyenochka
A sweet love poem in your favorite nonet style. I am glad that roses inspired you to write this one. My favorite part was the "keys of love." Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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A sweet love poem in your favorite nonet style. I am glad that roses inspired you to write this one. My favorite part was the "keys of love." Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review of my Nonet poem. Sending you all the best, Sally XOs....
Comment from Cindy Warren
I'm jealous. I want some red roses, and someone to play that tune for. I'm not an expert on nonets, but as far as I can tell this one looks perfect. Good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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I'm jealous. I want some red roses, and someone to play that tune for. I'm not an expert on nonets, but as far as I can tell this one looks perfect. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Aw, thank you. Feel free to join in. I do this as personal challenge and opened it to FanStory informally. Nonet is French for nine. It begins with nine syllables and reduces to one. Nine lines total. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs...
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This poem has several sensory images. There is an appeal to several senses. This is a poignant poem. Some readers will be able to identify with the passion described here. Well expressed.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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This poem has several sensory images. There is an appeal to several senses. This is a poignant poem. Some readers will be able to identify with the passion described here. Well expressed.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always
Sal xos
Comment from Sankey
Well done Sis. I presume it is a Nonet having 9 lines? Does the shape have anything to do with it too? Love;y [picture with it as well. No spags. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Well done Sis. I presume it is a Nonet having 9 lines? Does the shape have anything to do with it too? Love;y [picture with it as well. No spags. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your sweet review and kind compliments. Yes, a Nonet is a French form of poetry beginning with nine lines reducing down one syllable in each line to one. It creates a lovely presentation centered, or on the margin as I have here. Last month, I did a double reverse Nonet called "World Peace." You can catch it in my portfolio. Sending you my best today as always with many thanks, Sally :))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my! I enjoyed the form this poem was written in. It fit the words and emotion perfectly. Thank you so much for sharing. This is one of the best I've ever read. WOW oh WOW
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Oh my! I enjoyed the form this poem was written in. It fit the words and emotion perfectly. Thank you so much for sharing. This is one of the best I've ever read. WOW oh WOW
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for the wonderful comments. I started this challenge about a year ago really for myself to master this form of poetry. It's really not that hard it just takes a little time. I have several Nonets in my portfolio and have also taught this poetry form to others. I hope you'll try it. When I joined this site, I didn't think I'd ever write poetry. Seriously. Dean and Boo Ghost tempted me with a contest and I won. It was a Halloween Tanka. I may re-post it again in October just for fun. Two years years later and I love poetry.
Sending you my best today as always, with many thanks,
Sally XOs......
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet about the Red roses as a token of his love requesting his favorite song that you are willing to play until your dying day.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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A very well-written Nonet about the Red roses as a token of his love requesting his favorite song that you are willing to play until your dying day.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for reviewing my hopelessly romantic poem. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Sending my best today as always, Sally XOs......
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent nonet Sally, a great shape, (advanced editor would give it the v shape) a great sentiment, you romantic you. Beautifully written dear girl, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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This is an excellent nonet Sally, a great shape, (advanced editor would give it the v shape) a great sentiment, you romantic you. Beautifully written dear girl, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much, Roy dear. I really appreciate the compliments. Its so kind of you. Sending you all the best, Sally XOs.....
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Well done
