Rhyme, Rhythm And Song
The sounds of music55 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
I agree Jay. I love rhyming poems - sometimes I try something different but always come back to rhyme and meter.
I enjoyed your rhyming poem.
Blessings
Janet
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I agree Jay. I love rhyming poems - sometimes I try something different but always come back to rhyme and meter.
I enjoyed your rhyming poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from Sally Law
I adore music. If my day jobs ever end, I'll take up being a Disc Jockey. That or maybe a full-time writer.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Jay.
Sally XOs...
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I adore music. If my day jobs ever end, I'll take up being a Disc Jockey. That or maybe a full-time writer.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Jay.
Sally XOs...
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from karenina
I hear you. There is some especially fine free verse/unrhymed poetry out there for sure...but a song almost always thrives on the rhymes (and generally a repeating chorus)--In any event I would not wish a life without music and lyrics. Regardless of mood, I am always lifted up by a good song!--Karenina
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I hear you. There is some especially fine free verse/unrhymed poetry out there for sure...but a song almost always thrives on the rhymes (and generally a repeating chorus)--In any event I would not wish a life without music and lyrics. Regardless of mood, I am always lifted up by a good song!--Karenina
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from bob cullen
What a great quote. "A poem without rhyme is like a body without a soul." This reply expressed my long held views. It's really good to know I'm not alone in this view
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What a great quote. "A poem without rhyme is like a body without a soul." This reply expressed my long held views. It's really good to know I'm not alone in this view
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
Comment from Hopeful2
I do thank the poet who wrote the song. A solid sonnet form, adherence to your principles of rhyme and sound. Clever use of the mechanisms to teach the message.
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I do thank the poet who wrote the song. A solid sonnet form, adherence to your principles of rhyme and sound. Clever use of the mechanisms to teach the message.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love your sharing today, a real ode to the poet and its creation:"So, clear your voice and sing along-
And thank the poet who wrote the song. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings, Mr. Poet:)
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Love your sharing today, a real ode to the poet and its creation:"So, clear your voice and sing along-
And thank the poet who wrote the song. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings, Mr. Poet:)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
Comment from Father Flaps
I agree with you, Jay. Poetry needs rhyme. But you know what? Rhymed poems are not what publishers want today. They want free verse. They just aren't interested in rhymed lines. Sad, but true.
I think every tune you've ever heard on the radio rhymes. Maybe music needs rhyme. The Bobbsey Twins! Remember them? There were 79 stories, I think, written between 1904 and 1979.
Cheers,
Kimbob
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I agree with you, Jay. Poetry needs rhyme. But you know what? Rhymed poems are not what publishers want today. They want free verse. They just aren't interested in rhymed lines. Sad, but true.
I think every tune you've ever heard on the radio rhymes. Maybe music needs rhyme. The Bobbsey Twins! Remember them? There were 79 stories, I think, written between 1904 and 1979.
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, your sonnet is true. All songs are poetry and their words and music work together for the beauty and the meanin of it. We should always thankful for beautiful music.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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Yes, your sonnet is true. All songs are poetry and their words and music work together for the beauty and the meanin of it. We should always thankful for beautiful music.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Jaybird, I agree with you whole heartily. I just love poems with rhythmes. You do a very good job of that, hurrah for you. thank you for sharing this.
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Jaybird, I agree with you whole heartily. I just love poems with rhythmes. You do a very good job of that, hurrah for you. thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I completely agree with you, poetry has to rhyme. Ask all the long gone poets that we still read today. All wrote rhyming poetry. I wonder what they would think of free verse. I enjoy your well written poetry, it is the way children learn, too. When it rhymes, they can remember it more. I know I do. Well done, Jaybird, another beautiful poem. :)) Sandra
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I completely agree with you, poetry has to rhyme. Ask all the long gone poets that we still read today. All wrote rhyming poetry. I wonder what they would think of free verse. I enjoy your well written poetry, it is the way children learn, too. When it rhymes, they can remember it more. I know I do. Well done, Jaybird, another beautiful poem. :)) Sandra
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
