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Must...Keep...Eyes...Open

12 Word Poetry Contest Entry

7 total reviews 
Comment from Mia Twysted
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This is just funny. I had a good laugh after reading it. How many times we writers fall alseep while working. This has happened to me so much we drain ourselves sometimes getting the words on the page.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Thank you fore the awesome review, Mia. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Very cute and imaginative idea for your verse with its accompanying photo! She really is down for the count! Best wishes in this contest.

IMHO using a font with a serif makes for a better presentation to FS readers.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Mark. Yeah, I usually use serif but just wanted to keep it minimal from her lack of care for the contest. Lol.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This has a tongue-in-cheek humor tone. It is funny. The reader who is a writer will be drawn in and may possibly identify as they read this and reflect upon some of their writing experiences. Well thought out.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Liz. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow -- that must have been one heckuva night, yeah?! ;) lol! ;) A great contest offering for this extremely limited format contest -- thanx so very much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls this evening! ;) :)

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Lol. No, not one heck of a night. One heck of a boring contest. Hahaha. Thank you for the great review and stars, Yvette.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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She is evidently not a writer because the words would flow from her brain onto paper. Writer's block perhaps? There is one thing though, the brain is sacred and it tells us, "hands off." {Probably that is what she is thinking.
She wants her privacy!)

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Rosemary. No, what she's actually thinking is how boring she finds this short contest. Lol. I'm really just goofing around. I really appreciate the generous stars. Thank you again.
Comment from equestrik
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Your write made me chuckle and it went perfectly with your picture. You have stated a reality we all probably realize! Nice write of the contest!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the great review and stars, equestrik. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is hilarious. I love the creativity in your poem. Picture goes perfectly with the message! What a fun and creative take on the prompt. Great job!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Michael. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.