Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I like how you wrote this poem. It is well written. I have enjoyed reading your poetry. Very poetic. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I like how you wrote this poem. It is well written. I have enjoyed reading your poetry. Very poetic. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Tina Crute

Excellent

I have never seen this form before, but you did a great job with it. I love doves and what they stand for, so I was excited to read this! It is a beautiful expression of the peace of God that reigns:)
Tina

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020

Thanks so much. Elaine

reply by Tina Crute on 27-Sep-2020

You are welcome!
Tina

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A peaceful, calm presentation filled with the magic of bird life and how their song brings us tranquility in times of trouble, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020

Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Karen Estep

Excellent

The picture of the dove certainly gives light to which messenger God sent! I feel you told a calming story in a limited amount of words. Well done! Kudos for taking on a Renga.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020

Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Coincidentally, I am looking out the window at a bevy on my deck and on birdfeeders. I enjoyed your message that "tranquility reigns". Thank you for initiating the renga with your 7-7 couplet. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020

Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is a lovely message with a lovely illustration that pairs beautifully with your words. It is an excellent addition to the Renga Multi-Author Book. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020

Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Very Nice mermaids.
with you saying that there could be there will be peace.
with your post -- Peace Reigns -- when we see the gentle morning doves. I have been noticing a morning dove sits so quietly on the wooden rail of our deck. I'm wondering is this a sign of peace
Gert

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020

Thanks so much. Elaine

reply by Gert sherwood on 14-Sep-2020

You are welcome mermaids
Gert

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

I love doves and this is a beautiful presentation. The mourning dove is the one I am most familiar with. They hardly ever stop cooing and they are loyal to one certain area.

I have been muted by Gypsy, I have no idea why, so I won't be adding anythhing to her book.

Ralf

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020

Thanks so much. Elaine Was the muted a mistake?

reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 12-Sep-2020

I have no idea. Maybe she didn't like something I wrote, I don't know.

Ralf

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

Caught "s" consonance in flies, valleys, reigns. There was "t" alliteration in turmoil, tranquility. There is an example of metonymy with the phrase "God's messenger" with good syllable count. Peaceful tone, too!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020

Thanks so much. Elaine