Petals in the Wind
Terza Rima for Potlatch Poetry25 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A delightful, descriptive Terza Rima Yvonne about Nature's blowing of the petals, the seeds until they find a spot just right for them. I loved this one, though I'm not up to the challenge of Potlatch yet, have enjoyed reading them.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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A delightful, descriptive Terza Rima Yvonne about Nature's blowing of the petals, the seeds until they find a spot just right for them. I loved this one, though I'm not up to the challenge of Potlatch yet, have enjoyed reading them.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Valda. What a lovely review you've given me. I'm sorry you're not up to it yet, but we'll be waiting when you are. Take your time and know I'm thinking of you. 8-)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Lovely Terza Rima celebrating the wonderful 'circle of life' in the forest... but you've made it so much more with the beautiful metaphors and gentle emotions you've woven into the vision -- thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Lovely Terza Rima celebrating the wonderful 'circle of life' in the forest... but you've made it so much more with the beautiful metaphors and gentle emotions you've woven into the vision -- thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank YOU for reviewing.
Comment from judiverse
Beautiful terza rima. I like how you handled the rhyme. It reads very smoothly. Excellent imagery such as the petals whispering and the vines blowing their horns. You describe a celebration of new life. Great choice of the picture with the delicately colored flowers. judi
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Beautiful terza rima. I like how you handled the rhyme. It reads very smoothly. Excellent imagery such as the petals whispering and the vines blowing their horns. You describe a celebration of new life. Great choice of the picture with the delicately colored flowers. judi
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you. I appreciate that.t
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You're very welcome. Have a great week ahead. judi
Comment from poetwatch
Lovely, Yvonne. :) Your Terza sonnet meets the eye of this reader and I wondered... "How she do it?" The birth of the young written in the metaphor language of the leaves. Then again, you may be speaking about the leaves and how their seed brings up new trees. :) Either way, I like it. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Lovely, Yvonne. :) Your Terza sonnet meets the eye of this reader and I wondered... "How she do it?" The birth of the young written in the metaphor language of the leaves. Then again, you may be speaking about the leaves and how their seed brings up new trees. :) Either way, I like it. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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I'm glad you see that it can be taken both ways. Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Yvonne, you have truly my sweet friend...become The Queen Of different Forms...you just fall into the wording of this one...as you feel yourself being a falling pedal...now that's a talented poet my sweet friend...I love your poem you...and love your picture...so nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo
I am still staying pretty busy these days...right when I think it's time to stop...it's time to go again....sigh...
I hope all is well with you...take care...xxoo
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Hi Yvonne, you have truly my sweet friend...become The Queen Of different Forms...you just fall into the wording of this one...as you feel yourself being a falling pedal...now that's a talented poet my sweet friend...I love your poem you...and love your picture...so nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo
I am still staying pretty busy these days...right when I think it's time to stop...it's time to go again....sigh...
I hope all is well with you...take care...xxoo
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for a wonderful review. Why are you so busy? Slow down, girl.
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I'm working on the slow down part...LOL...and your so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Ulla
Hi Yvonne, I love this Terza Rima poem with a theme of hope and optimism for the future. New seeds are blown about giving birth to new growth when nature comes back to life after a winter's sleep. I liked your poem and a lot. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Hi Yvonne, I love this Terza Rima poem with a theme of hope and optimism for the future. New seeds are blown about giving birth to new growth when nature comes back to life after a winter's sleep. I liked your poem and a lot. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you. I'm glad.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem answers the potlatch challenge. It shows how nature renews itself. It reminds me of the white blossoms of the flowering crab apple trees falling.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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This poem answers the potlatch challenge. It shows how nature renews itself. It reminds me of the white blossoms of the flowering crab apple trees falling.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you. I thought of the flowering crap apple, too.
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You're welcome. Well, I guess great minds think alike.
Joan
Comment from karenina
This is just elegant, my friend. Those of us who have written this form (or tried to) know how difficult it can be to hold the rhyme, the form and a cohesive theme and STILL move the reader! This accomplishes all of that and more! Speaks to the circle of life...maybe we need to be reminded of that right now.--Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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This is just elegant, my friend. Those of us who have written this form (or tried to) know how difficult it can be to hold the rhyme, the form and a cohesive theme and STILL move the reader! This accomplishes all of that and more! Speaks to the circle of life...maybe we need to be reminded of that right now.--Karenina
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for a wonderful review. Much appreciated.
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Well earned!--Karenina
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Perfectly formed, good meter and rhymes and I adored the sentiments here. Your poem has it all and your finely chosen words make this a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Perfectly formed, good meter and rhymes and I adored the sentiments here. Your poem has it all and your finely chosen words make this a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, Dolly.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a lovely poem, Yvonne. Soothing and calm and the presentation is just beautiful. A pleasure to read this today. It inspires me to try one. Thank you so much for the inspiration. God Bless you. Nancy:)ð???ð???
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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This is a lovely poem, Yvonne. Soothing and calm and the presentation is just beautiful. A pleasure to read this today. It inspires me to try one. Thank you so much for the inspiration. God Bless you. Nancy:)ð???ð???
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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I'll look for yours. Thanks for reviewing.
