Alphabetic Ruminations
A modern-day ABC poetic twist on the Abecedarian...64 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Your alphabet poem its amazing with beautiful concepts about life and a certain nostalgia for good old times. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Your alphabet poem its amazing with beautiful concepts about life and a certain nostalgia for good old times. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and your writings.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Iza, for your review on this one, my lady!! ;) This was my first one in a while that I've actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... glad you enjoyed! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from robyn corum
Yvette,
What a creative and appropriate post - especially for this season in the US. People want to believe everything they hear and see in the media but everyone has an agenda. It's seems that it would be so clear to PONDER what you hear and decipher the truth for oneself, instead of being 'fed' everything.
Idk. I guess this is a sore spot with me. We, as a nation, are becoming so divided - and I feel like it's girls in junior high again with everyone LOOKING to see how they can get their feelings hurt. You can't LIVE that way. Ugh.
Such a creative way to do things here - but that's you in a nutshell. Thanks so much
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Yvette,
What a creative and appropriate post - especially for this season in the US. People want to believe everything they hear and see in the media but everyone has an agenda. It's seems that it would be so clear to PONDER what you hear and decipher the truth for oneself, instead of being 'fed' everything.
Idk. I guess this is a sore spot with me. We, as a nation, are becoming so divided - and I feel like it's girls in junior high again with everyone LOOKING to see how they can get their feelings hurt. You can't LIVE that way. Ugh.
Such a creative way to do things here - but that's you in a nutshell. Thanks so much
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Oh, the vibrations are JUST LIKE the middle school hallways back when I was full time... JUST as mature, and JUST as much consideration for future consequences. UGH!! I would say the consequences of not teaching critical thinking (i.e., 'teaching to the test') are coming home to roost...
Thanx for your review on this one, Robyn - was my first one in a while that I've actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... glad you enjoyed! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Y. M. Roger I like your modern twist of the alphabet
A-Y Smiles to your rhyming with your mixed pattern.
Question did you forget the letter Z
Best to you in the contest
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Hello Y. M. Roger I like your modern twist of the alphabet
A-Y Smiles to your rhyming with your mixed pattern.
Question did you forget the letter Z
Best to you in the contest
Gert
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Gert, for your review on this one, my lady!! ;) This was my first one in a while that I've actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... glad you enjoyed! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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Hello Y. M. Roger you are welcome
Keep that smile on your lovely face.
Gert
Comment from Alchera
Myopic crowds refuse to see
Nowhere is candor guaranteed.
Of course humanity is flawed,
Patent denial's intrinsic fraud...
Still, would you recognize it?
Yes, what could I add to your amazing and wonderful explanation and questioning of today's world historical sicknesses?
People are getting tired and angry about everything and are mostly against the nation's ill government. Faith is an illusion but it is the only thing we can still hold on! Great provoctive work! Sorry, I have no sixes|
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Myopic crowds refuse to see
Nowhere is candor guaranteed.
Of course humanity is flawed,
Patent denial's intrinsic fraud...
Still, would you recognize it?
Yes, what could I add to your amazing and wonderful explanation and questioning of today's world historical sicknesses?
People are getting tired and angry about everything and are mostly against the nation's ill government. Faith is an illusion but it is the only thing we can still hold on! Great provoctive work! Sorry, I have no sixes|
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Tony, for your review on this one, sir!! ;) This was my first one in a while that I've actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... glad you enjoyed! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share over there: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Very nicely done and a poem after my own heart. You've used excellent language and this style is cool, too. I've never tried such, but may now because of this work. Well done. Bruce.
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Very nicely done and a poem after my own heart. You've used excellent language and this style is cool, too. I've never tried such, but may now because of this work. Well done. Bruce.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Good morning, Bruce -- good to hear from you over here, sir! ;) Thanx so much for your wonderful review and for the stars to brighten the day! And I do look forward to your 'stab' at one later in the month -- I'll look for it on the 19th (or 29th?)... give me a heads up!! :) Take care and enjoy the weekend out there!! :) Yvette
Comment from karenina
Original and challenging and fun to see you succeed the march through the alphabet A to Z--and in a series of ABC poems no less! Ten extra points for "Xanthous" by the way---that darn "X" is the bane of poets everywhere and one can only use xenophobic so many times! (smile)--Good luck in the contest!--Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Original and challenging and fun to see you succeed the march through the alphabet A to Z--and in a series of ABC poems no less! Ten extra points for "Xanthous" by the way---that darn "X" is the bane of poets everywhere and one can only use xenophobic so many times! (smile)--Good luck in the contest!--Karenina
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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'x' marks the bane... I like it - lol!! ;) Thanx so much for your review, Karenina! ;) My first nonet all summer - trying to find a bit of normalcy again... at least for a few months... lol!! :) Take care and enjoy the weekend, my lady!! :) Yvette
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Hah! It's SOOOO true! I admit to sneaking off to a site that offers "50 words that begin with X"--(LOL)---Karenina
Comment from Sanku
wow! you really has taken extra steps in this alphabetical offering.Well done .There is a serious theme too. A comment on current scenario. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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wow! you really has taken extra steps in this alphabetical offering.Well done .There is a serious theme too. A comment on current scenario. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Sanku! ;) My first nonet all summer - trying to find a bit of normalcy again... at least for a few months, yeah?!! :) Take care and enjoy the week!! :) Yvette
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Wow, the whole alphabet! Well done. I'm sure you will do very well in the contest. We live in such a great country, I hope it can whether this storm and continue to be great. I worry about the next gen. =[ Very well done.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Wow, the whole alphabet! Well done. I'm sure you will do very well in the contest. We live in such a great country, I hope it can whether this storm and continue to be great. I worry about the next gen. =[ Very well done.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Roxanna! Not only for your comments but for those awesome stars and what they have to say as well! :) ;) This was my first poem in a while that I actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... just so much going on these days, ya know?! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows this world needs so much MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Patty Palmer
Sensational!! I love it!! You hit many things people need to open up their eyes to the way out world is going down the drain! And it's nobody's fault that that fires in California are burnng. The fact that this racial crap hs been brewing for a long time. We're all a different race. It's the way God made us and that's good enough for me. But this rioting has got to stop and there are innocent people dying that aren't a part of this thing. And when little babies, toddlers and young chidren are shot in the head, in a playgroundin broad daylight and it happens every day, and no one is stopping it, this world is in bad shape! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Sensational!! I love it!! You hit many things people need to open up their eyes to the way out world is going down the drain! And it's nobody's fault that that fires in California are burnng. The fact that this racial crap hs been brewing for a long time. We're all a different race. It's the way God made us and that's good enough for me. But this rioting has got to stop and there are innocent people dying that aren't a part of this thing. And when little babies, toddlers and young chidren are shot in the head, in a playgroundin broad daylight and it happens every day, and no one is stopping it, this world is in bad shape! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Beautiful rant, my lady -- put that to your pen and I look forward to reading it!! ;) :) Thanx so much, Patty... not only for your comments but for those awesome stars and what they have to say as well! :) ;) This was my first poem in a while that I actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... just so much going on these days, ya know?! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share (and pen ready to write!)! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsymooncat
I'm glad you went all out on this, you eccentric blonde, you. This is wonderful! You've managed to use every alphabet letter without turning out a poem that sounds forced and stiff; instead, it flowed along like white wine...hmm...yum, wine o'clock's not far off so it appears... I loved it and reckon it was awesome and wish you best luck in the contest, although I don't think you'll need it!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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I'm glad you went all out on this, you eccentric blonde, you. This is wonderful! You've managed to use every alphabet letter without turning out a poem that sounds forced and stiff; instead, it flowed along like white wine...hmm...yum, wine o'clock's not far off so it appears... I loved it and reckon it was awesome and wish you best luck in the contest, although I don't think you'll need it!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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LOL - bring on the wine! ;) Thanx so much, Gypsy! Not only for your comments but for those awesome stars and what they have to say as well! :) ;) This was my first poem in a while that I actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... just so much going on these days, ya know?! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share, my lady: goodness knows this world needs so much MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
