Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Wonderful entry for the
10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. I like the imagery in your poem. The presentation is beautiful too. I like the love and light topic. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This ten-word poem, Light Bearer, has the proper word count and gives a bright smile back to the person who has made a positive change in another's life. Nice.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This is a fine thought for the 10 Word Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020

Thank you for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 12-Sep-2020

You're very welcome!

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes and this often how life happens in the everyday without any warning or preparation 'You walked into my life'- what a delightful moment in any life

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020

Thanks for your review. It's amazing how situations just happen.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your words bring forth good feelings and you did well with the ten word contest. Short poems can be more difficult than longer poems and you did well here.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020

Knowing what I wanted to write was easy, confining it to ten words was not!

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a very beautiful romantic piece of writing. I like the visual you chose to go with your writing as well . It fits well with your poem. The background color and text stand out nicely.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020

Thanks a lot for your review. Much appreciated

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Your poem speaks to me of something wonderful happening in your life that has made you feel uplifted out of previous dark times, and cheerful. This is usually caused by finding a new friend or feeling love - so this poem could be seen as spiritual or personal.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020

Thanks for your review. I was meaning for this to be my feelings towards my partner but yes, it could be for a number of reasons.

Comment from Sea Emmanuel

Excellent

This is heartwarming.
It's really an accurate confession of how just someone's presence can help create an entirely new outlook on everything around us.

Great job

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.