Hum A Happy Tune
It will lift you68 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, you could whistle a happy tune to lift your spirit - "from gloom to glad" - liked that! I could never whistle but I sing and hum. Thank you for this great reminder on how to perk oneself up!
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Ah, you could whistle a happy tune to lift your spirit - "from gloom to glad" - liked that! I could never whistle but I sing and hum. Thank you for this great reminder on how to perk oneself up!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
Comment from royowen
I never thought of it that way, that losing one's teeth could easily curtail one's whistling, heh heh, as usual your writing is skilfully and knowledgeably written, well done my friend, blessings Roy
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I never thought of it that way, that losing one's teeth could easily curtail one's whistling, heh heh, as usual your writing is skilfully and knowledgeably written, well done my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
Comment from TPAC
An uplifting thought, telling of self comforting through simple sounds we make with our mouths, captured a small relief when one is sad. All views stated in my given opinion.
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An uplifting thought, telling of self comforting through simple sounds we make with our mouths, captured a small relief when one is sad. All views stated in my given opinion.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
Comment from emmaysavage
Your rhymes are natural and not strained. I liked following the speaker and his expressiveness during the transititions of a lifetime. My husband hums even in his sleep.
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Your rhymes are natural and not strained. I liked following the speaker and his expressiveness during the transititions of a lifetime. My husband hums even in his sleep.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a good way to remind all of what you wish to share. Your poem reads well with a great message. I like the rhymes, the smooth lines, and of course the message. My grandfather always sang while he worked.
Respectfully, Jan
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This is a good way to remind all of what you wish to share. Your poem reads well with a great message. I like the rhymes, the smooth lines, and of course the message. My grandfather always sang while he worked.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
Comment from GE Parson
Hi Mr. Jaybird, I really identified with your poem,
as I too have always been a whistler from as I can remember. I remember hearing my Dad whistle when I was about 4 yrs. old and I was intrigued by it so started whistling too and have never stopped, to some people's irritants.
Then like you my teeth went to pot and I found it difficult to whistle, except I could by sucking in.
Anyway if my arithmatic is correct you are a 90 yr. old mam.
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Hi Mr. Jaybird, I really identified with your poem,
as I too have always been a whistler from as I can remember. I remember hearing my Dad whistle when I was about 4 yrs. old and I was intrigued by it so started whistling too and have never stopped, to some people's irritants.
Then like you my teeth went to pot and I found it difficult to whistle, except I could by sucking in.
Anyway if my arithmatic is correct you are a 90 yr. old mam.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love this Jay and the awesome message conveyed in it. You've figured out how to make a joyful noise in spite of the ravages of age. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
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I love this Jay and the awesome message conveyed in it. You've figured out how to make a joyful noise in spite of the ravages of age. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
Comment from Teri7
I love this very well written poem you have penned about how it makes you feel to hum. You used great descriptive words and this is very good advice. It does work. blessings, Teri
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I love this very well written poem you have penned about how it makes you feel to hum. You used great descriptive words and this is very good advice. It does work. blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
