Corona effect?
10 word poem14 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have used your ten words effectively in this timely piece. There are those who still are almost totally isolating, those who are still like "DUH! What pandemic?!" and those in-between. I'm in-between.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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You have used your ten words effectively in this timely piece. There are those who still are almost totally isolating, those who are still like "DUH! What pandemic?!" and those in-between. I'm in-between.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.I think I am also in-between
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Interesting entry for the
10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. I like the imagery in your poem. The presentation is nice too. I like the covid19 topic. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Interesting entry for the
10 Word Poem writing prompt contest. I like the imagery in your poem. The presentation is nice too. I like the covid19 topic. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Bill Schott
This ten-word poem, Corona Effect, has the proper word count and finds that the pets are made curious by our odd cloistering.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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This ten-word poem, Corona Effect, has the proper word count and finds that the pets are made curious by our odd cloistering.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ten-word poem about the effect of the coronavirus that keeps the humans in their cages and the pets wonder what happen that they are not taken for walks anymore.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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A very well-written ten-word poem about the effect of the coronavirus that keeps the humans in their cages and the pets wonder what happen that they are not taken for walks anymore.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Amen, my friend! I don't know about all of you, but I feel locked in a cage. Maybe we're all on one giant Time-Out, hehe.
Great image, very timely,
Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Amen, my friend! I don't know about all of you, but I feel locked in a cage. Maybe we're all on one giant Time-Out, hehe.
Great image, very timely,
Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.Yes it is a giant time out!
Comment from palmart
How things can radically change when we take another point of view!!! This is clearly expressed in your writing. Picture plays in this case a main role as without that dog, poem would be totally "left in the wind". But picture adds a sense of humanity and "closeness" to what we have seen worldwide.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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How things can radically change when we take another point of view!!! This is clearly expressed in your writing. Picture plays in this case a main role as without that dog, poem would be totally "left in the wind". But picture adds a sense of humanity and "closeness" to what we have seen worldwide.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much .Since the word limit was 10 the picture becomes necessary ..
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Perfect Sanku! Yours is a good point of view.
Hope you the Best in coming contests!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a fine thought for the 10 Word Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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This is a fine thought for the 10 Word Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Corona effect indeed. Wryly ironic--what a twist--dogs on the loose whilst we're locked in our cages. Well and concisely stated! Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Corona effect indeed. Wryly ironic--what a twist--dogs on the loose whilst we're locked in our cages. Well and concisely stated! Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Yes it is ironical isnt'it? .I can see birds flying around too
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, Ha, Ha, this is a good one:"Where are the humans these days?
locked in their cages? " We are in cage indeed. Thank you for sharing and good luck wit the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Ha, Ha, Ha, this is a good one:"Where are the humans these days?
locked in their cages? " We are in cage indeed. Thank you for sharing and good luck wit the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much ..is funny but yet it is not..frustrating..
Comment from LisaMay
Haha - yes, it must be confusing for other creatures. Everything has been turned on its head... it does feel like we've been locked in our cages, even if they are nice surroundings, we've lost many former freedoms. Cute picture - portrays that perplexed expression well, to reinforce your poem.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Haha - yes, it must be confusing for other creatures. Everything has been turned on its head... it does feel like we've been locked in our cages, even if they are nice surroundings, we've lost many former freedoms. Cute picture - portrays that perplexed expression well, to reinforce your poem.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much.Yes I used to wonder when I see the birds,dogs and cats continue as usual if it is a topsy turvy world...
