One for the road Gypsy
5/7/5 poem2 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I agree wholeheartedly. If votes were awarded to the degree of disgusting gross nastiness, your poem should in all honesty win by a landslide. However, there are still too many deluded Trump fans who seem quite capable of ignoring what is blatantly obvious to sensible people like us.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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I agree wholeheartedly. If votes were awarded to the degree of disgusting gross nastiness, your poem should in all honesty win by a landslide. However, there are still too many deluded Trump fans who seem quite capable of ignoring what is blatantly obvious to sensible people like us.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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The worst fear I have is about the aftermath, following the elections; I thank you for your time and the encouraging review.
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I think there may be shocking repercussions. I'm glad I don't live there. We are having a national election ourselves and the politicking is tame compared to USA. It still seems to bring out the nasty side of some people here, too.
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hypocrisy is rampant in politics of today
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Agreed. They say one thing, do another.
Comment from lancellot
Well, your syllable count is good. The last line though seems to be missing a vital word for it to make perfect sense, but I get what you wanted to say.
I think is a difficult prompt, here why:
"The subject of Lowku is something gross, nasty, or disgusting we find in everyday life."
The issue is: disgusting "we" find in everyday life.
What you wrote about is what 'you' found disgusting. I will not debate your reasons, you are entitled to your opinion.
I think the prompt could have been clearer. I will not hold that against you.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Well, your syllable count is good. The last line though seems to be missing a vital word for it to make perfect sense, but I get what you wanted to say.
I think is a difficult prompt, here why:
"The subject of Lowku is something gross, nasty, or disgusting we find in everyday life."
The issue is: disgusting "we" find in everyday life.
What you wrote about is what 'you' found disgusting. I will not debate your reasons, you are entitled to your opinion.
I think the prompt could have been clearer. I will not hold that against you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Well my friend, to me this presidency is the most disgusting thing to watch every day and there are millions who feel the same; I am an addict when it comes to politics; I appreciate your time and the insights, thank you very much..
