Comment from cdefan

Excellent

Exciting from the beginning to the end. Well written and great descriptions. The conversations between characters seem believable and real. Great writing! Looking forward to the next chapter.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020

Thanks so much for the input and kind review! Sorry it took a while to thank you. I have been out camping most of the week :)

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Great second part to the 1st part! So now that Tara made it safe into the Breedline hands, I wonder what they will do next. Sounds like they all have another evil villain to deal with. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Super writing my friend.
Nate

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020

Thanks Nate :)

You are so awesome! You always make my day with your words of encouragement.

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

I'm so glad she's alright and that it was those two who found her. Anyone else would probably think she was nuts, commit her to a psych ward. Your story is very well-written, interesting, very realistic start to finish. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

Yes, Tara is lucky the Breedline came along at the right time. But the creature will not give up, unfortunately. Stay tuned!

Thanks so much for all your support. You make a difference!
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

As usual you are very descriptive, your imagery is first class, the fact that Lawrence and Roman turned up in the "nick" of time, is another story, that weaves itself decoursely into your brilliantly imaginative stories, it seems you have an endless supply of creativity, but then why not? Well done, excellent post. Roy

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020

Thanks my dear friend :)

Yes, Tara is lucky the Breedline came along when they did. But unfortunately, the creature does not give up that easily.

Thanks again for all your support!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 09-Sep-2020

I noticed that, well done Shana

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello scongrove this chapter in your book THE CURSE
The Wolf-Man/Part 2. Yes kept my attention, with your excellent dialogue and you way of keeping me to read more.
Gert

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020

Thank you, Gert :)

Glad you enjoyed. This chapter is actually from the book The Immortal. I had to take a break from The Curse to go back and re-edit my previous books. Plus, I'm getting them all republished with another company. My previous one is not turning in my royalties. But, I'm getting back to writing in The Curse.

Thanks for taking the time to read my chapter. I appreciate your review.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

A very heart rendering chapter - the saving of Tara, and then her having to recall the previous incident. Each scene flowed smoothly into the next. I especially like Tara's descriptions of her rescuers. Good, vivid pictures to accentuate your words.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020

Thanks so much, Faye :)

Although Tara lost her boyfriend in a horrible way, she is lucky the Breedline came along when they did. Hopefully they can keep her safe. More Breedline adventures to come!

Thanks again for all your support. You make a difference!
Stay safe!
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 09-Sep-2020

Looking forward to reading them.
Hugs,
Faye

Comment from Alex Kashko

Good

The novel looks like it could be interesting though perhaps I can see some plotlines ahead (romance, danger, Tara being a breedline...)

The plot seems to be an action thriller transposed to the urban fantasy genre.

I think you need give a bit of attention to the dialogue and I am not sure a Tara would be that composed and able to recount events that lucidly.

Will the makes of car or the particular hospital be significant further along in the book?

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020

Thanks Alex :)

I appreciate your time and feedback.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

The creativity in your writing is wonderful. This was another powerful chapter. Great use of dialogue. A fun read. I'm enjoying your book so far! Looking forward to more.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020

Thanks Michael :)

I appreciate the great feedback and motivating review. It's nice to hear positive words.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Justin Chopin

Excellent

Well done Grove. I thought the additions of the Colbert and Kincaid characters were a great idea because to me they seem to give Tara a false sense of assurance as if they tell her all the things that they know would comfort her when in reality they have plans to exploit her trust in them. Thought the descriptions of Tara losing her breath and becoming panicked by the memories of Brandon were very well written. Great job with this piece.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020

Thank you, Justin :)

I appreciate the great review and positive feedback. I do love to write suspense scenes, and this one brought out my creativity. I'm happy you enjoyed. Your kind words keep me motivated.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Justin Chopin on 09-Sep-2020

You're welcome.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

I like and have enjoyed the read of the fantastic supernatural part 2 of the realistic taletelling of the novel, Wolf Man, the skimmed plot development, appropriate and contributory dialogues; good beginning and humane ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020

Thanks so much, Alcreator :)

Glad you stopped in again to read my Breedline adventures. Your kind words always brighten my day. Thanks for all the positive feedback.

Sincerely,
Shana :)