Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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31 total reviews
Comment from Markie Doczi
Very abstract, and you leave the reader to ponder at the end! I love your descriptive words; it is very easy to visualize as you read along.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Very abstract, and you leave the reader to ponder at the end! I love your descriptive words; it is very easy to visualize as you read along.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Markie, thank you I value the validation of the poem.
Comment from Gypsymooncat
I guess I'd feel privileged once I got over my initial fear, if a ghost chose to write to me. Or write through me. I enjoyed this poem for the atmosphere it created around me as I read; it was ephemeral, surreal and ghostly, but in a very positive way. Well said!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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I guess I'd feel privileged once I got over my initial fear, if a ghost chose to write to me. Or write through me. I enjoyed this poem for the atmosphere it created around me as I read; it was ephemeral, surreal and ghostly, but in a very positive way. Well said!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Gypsymooncat, I am smiling back, thanks for the kind words.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Wow!
This is something!
I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they perfectly match you captured my attention from the first line to the last, It gave me chill when she said write my life story
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Wow!
This is something!
I like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they perfectly match you captured my attention from the first line to the last, It gave me chill when she said write my life story
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Miss Cookie, thank you for your review and comments
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Your very welcome
Have a safe and blessed day
Cookie
Comment from roof35
This is a fun ghost story and it is well written. Your illustration, of course, sets the stage for your words so it pairs well. The voice of the ghost is perfect for getting the message across.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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This is a fun ghost story and it is well written. Your illustration, of course, sets the stage for your words so it pairs well. The voice of the ghost is perfect for getting the message across.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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roof35 thannk you, I am pleased you found it enjoyable to read.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your challenge poem for the club. You clearly portrayed the POV of the ghost(s). Your lines read well with good flow and great imagery. I could see everything you wrote. I really like the last verse about the ghost saying to write my story before you are too old. Your art choice works well, too.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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I enjoyed your challenge poem for the club. You clearly portrayed the POV of the ghost(s). Your lines read well with good flow and great imagery. I could see everything you wrote. I really like the last verse about the ghost saying to write my story before you are too old. Your art choice works well, too.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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JAn, I so appreciate your validating comments.
Comment from Mastery
Another fine poem, Jim. Your use of strong verbs through the entire poem accounts for most of its strength.
"Suddenly, a ghostly figure evolved
hunched over my deeply scarred
writing table with the bib of the
quill dipped in the jet black ink well"
Brilliant :) Bob
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Another fine poem, Jim. Your use of strong verbs through the entire poem accounts for most of its strength.
"Suddenly, a ghostly figure evolved
hunched over my deeply scarred
writing table with the bib of the
quill dipped in the jet black ink well"
Brilliant :) Bob
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, Bob! I am certainly enjoying the FanStory world. Its been just over 15 months, the timeliness has been so valuable to keep my sanity through his Covid-19 world this experience and connections have been heaven-sent.
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:) Bob
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You give words "Ghost Writer" a new meaning and a very fun one. You painted a clear image of this ghost holding a quill floating over your desk and telling you to write. It is a great poem about writing. I imagine you enjoy writing it, too.
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You give words "Ghost Writer" a new meaning and a very fun one. You painted a clear image of this ghost holding a quill floating over your desk and telling you to write. It is a great poem about writing. I imagine you enjoy writing it, too.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Lisa, I am so honored by your review and six-star validation, I enjoyed this writing.
Comment from Boogienights
Fantastic! Memories in the form of a ghost urging you to write them down. I wish my mom and dad had done that... I only have bits and pieces of thier lives. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Fantastic! Memories in the form of a ghost urging you to write them down. I wish my mom and dad had done that... I only have bits and pieces of thier lives. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Boogienights, May you find the ability to reflect and capture your stories so that those in your life will have the opportunity to have fire side chats about your and your contribution to life.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear JLR your ghostly contribution to our Free Versers Club reminds me that I must get busy writing one myself as soon as I finish this batch of reviews that I must write for my growing list of friends.
But this dozen or more will do me in, and I may not get it done tonight.
As for your post, did your Ghost tell your anything more than you " Had to write their story?"
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Dear JLR your ghostly contribution to our Free Versers Club reminds me that I must get busy writing one myself as soon as I finish this batch of reviews that I must write for my growing list of friends.
But this dozen or more will do me in, and I may not get it done tonight.
As for your post, did your Ghost tell your anything more than you " Had to write their story?"
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Suzanne, I am being led each and everyday by my spirit guides to write. This truly doesn't come to me as an option, it comes to me as a must do.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I often wonder how poets come up with their poetry. This site is an eye opener. I see that the brainpower of a poet is quite amazing. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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I often wonder how poets come up with their poetry. This site is an eye opener. I see that the brainpower of a poet is quite amazing. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Rebecca, as weird as this may sound, I believe for me, my best poetry doesn't come from brainpower, but that which is contained with in the heart and are often words that if I thought about them I would not find easy to write.
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That is your gift!
