Old Man Winter's Secret
How to tell Winter is coming46 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Tina.
-Your note is appreciated.
-A well written poem with
a good topic, imagery, and rhyme.
-The second line is my favorite one,
it flows smoothly and adds to the imagery.
-I like the concluding line, too.
-A very good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Tina.
-Your note is appreciated.
-A well written poem with
a good topic, imagery, and rhyme.
-The second line is my favorite one,
it flows smoothly and adds to the imagery.
-I like the concluding line, too.
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Pam. I appreciate the review!
Tina
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You are welcome, Tina.
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:):)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ABC poem about the colder weather become part of your days while everyone is preparing for the winter. Winter refuse to say when the snow will come this year.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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A very well-written ABC poem about the colder weather become part of your days while everyone is preparing for the winter. Winter refuse to say when the snow will come this year.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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You got it exactly. Sandra! Thanks for the review!
Tina
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Old Man Winter's Secret", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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"Old Man Winter's Secret", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill, this talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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What a wonderful thing to wake up to! Thank you so much, my friend!! I hope you know how much a review from you means:)
Tina
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice images, evocative of winter tells the story in a few words paints the picture of winter's ever dying stories well done nice use of formal verse as well
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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nice images, evocative of winter tells the story in a few words paints the picture of winter's ever dying stories well done nice use of formal verse as well
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Jake! I appreciate your taking the time to review this!
Tina
Comment from Iza Deleanu
not waiting for it,but she knocking on the door the old good winter. I love the description of winter. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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not waiting for it,but she knocking on the door the old good winter. I love the description of winter. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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I love that thought...knocking on the door! Thats what winter does. It comes calling.Thank you, Iza!
Tina
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I don't know which came first, but you have found a perfect match. The illustation and text play off against each other perfectly, and even the backdrop joins in the game. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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I don't know which came first, but you have found a perfect match. The illustation and text play off against each other perfectly, and even the backdrop joins in the game. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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The poem came first. I was fortunate to find the picture! Thank you for the review and compliment. It means a lot@
Tina
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The signs of winter are evident in your words here Tina and they all gave me a chill down my spine. I welcome some cooler weather, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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The signs of winter are evident in your words here Tina and they all gave me a chill down my spine. I welcome some cooler weather, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Dolly, thank you for this review.Yes, signs point the way. I like that! Because your work is so excellent, this review means much to me!
Tina
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You are so right about the old man winter who likes to surprise us without any warning. Here comes snow all the sudden. Then we just have to put on winter coat and pick up the snow shovel.
Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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You are so right about the old man winter who likes to surprise us without any warning. Here comes snow all the sudden. Then we just have to put on winter coat and pick up the snow shovel.
Well done.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my work and for your take on it, which is exactly what was in my head when I wrote it!
Tina
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your ABC poem about the coming of winter with "clues" like "frost" but not yet "Kisses of snow". Your internal and end rhymes are very effective along with the snowflake artwork. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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I enjoyed your ABC poem about the coming of winter with "clues" like "frost" but not yet "Kisses of snow". Your internal and end rhymes are very effective along with the snowflake artwork. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Joan,
I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for reviewing it!
Tina
Comment from damommy
I'm ready for him. Tired of this awful heat. This is beautifully written with excellent rhyme. A very good entry for the contest. The presentation is perfect for the theme. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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I'm ready for him. Tired of this awful heat. This is beautifully written with excellent rhyme. A very good entry for the contest. The presentation is perfect for the theme. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, damommy:) It could be Fall all year for me and I would be happy. Snow is beautiful though! Thank you for the nice review!
Tina
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Me, too. And I love rainy days!
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I love rainy days too! Are we related,lol?
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8-). It's good to find a kindred soul. I love cold, dreary, rainy days. And I love the cold of Fall and Winter.
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I love the cold outside, as long as I am warm! Hello, kindred spirit! I look forward to reading some of your work:)
Tina
