Letter To A Struggling Man
A true story of a man in my neighborhood.13 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for reaching out to this despairing man with your letter and poem. It was good of you to share your personal experience in a non-judgmental way and encourage him to keep talking with you and be an "overcomer". -Joan
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
Thank you for reaching out to this despairing man with your letter and poem. It was good of you to share your personal experience in a non-judgmental way and encourage him to keep talking with you and be an "overcomer". -Joan
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review.
Comment from Mistydawn
What a beautiful letter. So warm, heartfelt, reassuring. I do hope Justine turns to you for help. Your poem is so inspirational it brought tears to my eyes. I'm going to add this to my bookcase. I hope you don't mind.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
What a beautiful letter. So warm, heartfelt, reassuring. I do hope Justine turns to you for help. Your poem is so inspirational it brought tears to my eyes. I'm going to add this to my bookcase. I hope you don't mind.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review.
Comment from zanya
What a gift to find a listening ear in this busy and fear-filled worl - that is joy indeed -the poem that follows reminds us that we can call on the Savior to assist us in these harrowing experiences
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
What a gift to find a listening ear in this busy and fear-filled worl - that is joy indeed -the poem that follows reminds us that we can call on the Savior to assist us in these harrowing experiences
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Patricia,
This haibun is a good mix of prose and poetry. It shows the extent of your heart and the love and help of God. It shows how faith can give you strength to change your life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
Patricia,
This haibun is a good mix of prose and poetry. It shows the extent of your heart and the love and help of God. It shows how faith can give you strength to change your life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written uplifting and encouraging story and poem for anyone who need some love and certainty that there is still good no matter how bad our situation looks God can turn everything around in our favor
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
A very well-written uplifting and encouraging story and poem for anyone who need some love and certainty that there is still good no matter how bad our situation looks God can turn everything around in our favor
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great testimony to you and your friend, Patricia. I'm glad you were/are there for him. Hopefully, he will be able to change his life in a way that will make God proud. You are right about God being enough. Your poem at the end is perfect.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
This is a great testimony to you and your friend, Patricia. I'm glad you were/are there for him. Hopefully, he will be able to change his life in a way that will make God proud. You are right about God being enough. Your poem at the end is perfect.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. I appreciate it.
Comment from BethShelby
Patricia, I know God is using you. i admire your ability to talk to strangers and pray with them. This is a beautiful letter. I will pray for this man and his family.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
Patricia, I know God is using you. i admire your ability to talk to strangers and pray with them. This is a beautiful letter. I will pray for this man and his family.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. I appreciate it.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great letter to a man struggling with an addiction. He will need many prayers, but help is available and Christ will be there to help.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
This is a great letter to a man struggling with an addiction. He will need many prayers, but help is available and Christ will be there to help.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is such a beautiful, uplifting, and touching piece--both the prose and the poem. The part that stands out the most is your telling him you will listen without judging.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
This is such a beautiful, uplifting, and touching piece--both the prose and the poem. The part that stands out the most is your telling him you will listen without judging.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. I appreciate it.
Comment from royowen
Yes indeed, God is indeed enough. I was a drunk, I smoked and I gambled, and God delivered all three addictions, so I certainly believe that God can do it, I had two very young children at the tim, and they have never been near those things, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
Yes indeed, God is indeed enough. I was a drunk, I smoked and I gambled, and God delivered all three addictions, so I certainly believe that God can do it, I had two very young children at the tim, and they have never been near those things, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thanks Roy for your review.
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