Cupid's Work
Lantern Poem8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lantern poem about Cupid's work to bring love into the hearts of people that belong together and make them grow into love.
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A very well-written Lantern poem about Cupid's work to bring love into the hearts of people that belong together and make them grow into love.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from Mia Twysted
A true message to send and share with the world. For who are we to judge how and who another loves. You give hope in this piece that love can be found and will "grow" with you once you find it.
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A true message to send and share with the world. For who are we to judge how and who another loves. You give hope in this piece that love can be found and will "grow" with you once you find it.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from roof35
This is an excellent entry for the Lantern Poem Contest. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. Good luck in the contest.
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This is an excellent entry for the Lantern Poem Contest. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Nice entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows well. I like the presentation. I like the love topic. Good luck in the contest.
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Hello anonymous
Nice entry for the Lantern poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows well. I like the presentation. I like the love topic. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Best of luck with your "Lantern Poetry," entry. The format follows the rules. The title gave me a hint to the body of work and it did relate very well. The mood of Love was certainly the subject. Best regards.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Best of luck with your "Lantern Poetry," entry. The format follows the rules. The title gave me a hint to the body of work and it did relate very well. The mood of Love was certainly the subject. Best regards.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thanks very much for your review
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written Lantern poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This is a very beautiful and well written Lantern poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
A beautiful poem and I enjoyed your creativity, visuals and presentation; However, your red text font on that color background is jarring to the eyes; and makes it hard to read. Perhaps, a darker color font would make for a better presentation. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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A beautiful poem and I enjoyed your creativity, visuals and presentation; However, your red text font on that color background is jarring to the eyes; and makes it hard to read. Perhaps, a darker color font would make for a better presentation. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. Apologies about the colour, looked ok on computer but I can see totally different if reading on phone. Now been changed, hope it's better.
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It is much better!
