A Song Finds Its Way
Realizing the source of my joy and inspiration.8 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The resolution in this query is lovely. I love that you saw it all comes from Nature. I am always a little saddened to relize there ate many who would never find the answer as our speaker here has. There are many who do no know of nature except for pictures and movies and nature videos. We are fortunate.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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The resolution in this query is lovely. I love that you saw it all comes from Nature. I am always a little saddened to relize there ate many who would never find the answer as our speaker here has. There are many who do no know of nature except for pictures and movies and nature videos. We are fortunate.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thank you Liz for your excellent review and rating. Yes, Nature is one of those many blessings that we often take for granted.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
well written using repetition in a profound and meaningful way.
Truthfully in using repetition, I was expecting something written that was shorter and lighter. This was a wonderful surprise being so beautifully written . Your give this reader a chance to hear your song..
MTV
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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well written using repetition in a profound and meaningful way.
Truthfully in using repetition, I was expecting something written that was shorter and lighter. This was a wonderful surprise being so beautifully written . Your give this reader a chance to hear your song..
MTV
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Blessings Mary and thank you for your wonderful review and six star rating. Glad my song found its way to you as well.:)
Comment from Sea Emmanuel
This is a refreshing read. I like the sense of a "misunderstood to greatly appreciated blessing" I get from reading it. You created something special here. Great work
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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This is a refreshing read. I like the sense of a "misunderstood to greatly appreciated blessing" I get from reading it. You created something special here. Great work
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Blessings and thank you so much for your excellent review and rating. I'm glad you understood the transition from gloom to joy, it's often just a matter of knowing where all that's good comes from.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
O! I know this feeling. The first time this happens, God is really reaching out to you, awakens light and happiness in your heart, you can hardly believe it is true. It happens at the time when you feel so very low, so desperate, so terribly alone, and then, suddenly and unexpected, He is there and gives us what we most need: His love, His assurance, His joy, and you know you are not alone ever again.
You wrote a beautiful repetition poem as your own testimony of this immense turn in your life. Well done!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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O! I know this feeling. The first time this happens, God is really reaching out to you, awakens light and happiness in your heart, you can hardly believe it is true. It happens at the time when you feel so very low, so desperate, so terribly alone, and then, suddenly and unexpected, He is there and gives us what we most need: His love, His assurance, His joy, and you know you are not alone ever again.
You wrote a beautiful repetition poem as your own testimony of this immense turn in your life. Well done!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Blessings and thank you for your wonderful review and rating. I'm so glad we share this revelation and understand where our joy and all that's good comes from. When one realizes that then when Jesus said, I will never leave you nor forsake you, we truly understand what he meant.
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So welcome.
Comment from roof35
This is an excellent entry for the repeated line contest. If I had a six stars left, I would give it to you. It is well written with no errors and it flows beautifully. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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This is an excellent entry for the repeated line contest. If I had a six stars left, I would give it to you. It is well written with no errors and it flows beautifully. Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Blessings, and thanks for your excellent review and rating.
Comment from AnnieDawn
This poem speaks of a song, yet it could be a song itself. It reads like a song would be sung. My head was searching for a melody to go along with the words as I read through this post. Great job on this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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This poem speaks of a song, yet it could be a song itself. It reads like a song would be sung. My head was searching for a melody to go along with the words as I read through this post. Great job on this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your excellent review and rating. I'm glad it inspired you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Hearing your song here gives us all hope that we can all sing and make our days happy and let our spirit shine, I enjoyed your positivity and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Hearing your song here gives us all hope that we can all sing and make our days happy and let our spirit shine, I enjoyed your positivity and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Blessings and thank you for your excellent review and rating. Yes, even in our darkest moments joy finds us, if we're open to it.
Comment from LisaMay
Your 'song' in the form of a poem found its way into my heart too. I like it very much - the repeated lines are integrated well, and then the question posed finds its answer in the last stanza: "From your very heart to this wounded soul."
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Your 'song' in the form of a poem found its way into my heart too. I like it very much - the repeated lines are integrated well, and then the question posed finds its answer in the last stanza: "From your very heart to this wounded soul."
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Blessings LisaMay and thank you for your excellent review and rating. I appreciate your comments and am glad that it found its way to you as well.
