God knew better
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. When we are single and the opportunity to meet someone in real life we often go to find a friend we can talk to virtually. I have such a friend for several years now.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. When we are single and the opportunity to meet someone in real life we often go to find a friend we can talk to virtually. I have such a friend for several years now.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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I know virtually, everything seems puurfect:)
Comment from Ric Myworld
Aw, what a sweet story! No love story is perfect, it's a daily struggle. Two individuals trying to live with each other, each trying to give 100%, while the other thinks is 50% too little. LOL. I like happy endings! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Aw, what a sweet story! No love story is perfect, it's a daily struggle. Two individuals trying to live with each other, each trying to give 100%, while the other thinks is 50% too little. LOL. I like happy endings! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your insightful review:) it's not easy to live with the burden of a dream:) of perfection, reality someday it's a nightmare:)viva le kitties:)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Ultimately you have narrated a true story, about your personal sentimental reflections, good taletelling with realistic plot development, for God knew better how you meant to be together with beautiful kitties; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Ultimately you have narrated a true story, about your personal sentimental reflections, good taletelling with realistic plot development, for God knew better how you meant to be together with beautiful kitties; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, you capture the essence of the story:)
Comment from writer723
This is a very charming and lovely story about how you met your soul mate. I found it enjoyable and I liked your descriptions about how your first meeting took place. I think it was very sweet for him to help you with your medicine. I like the way you said that God knew better. Yes, I agree that He always knows what's best for us. Your romantic experience just proves that we can find our future mate in places we least expect.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This is a very charming and lovely story about how you met your soul mate. I found it enjoyable and I liked your descriptions about how your first meeting took place. I think it was very sweet for him to help you with your medicine. I like the way you said that God knew better. Yes, I agree that He always knows what's best for us. Your romantic experience just proves that we can find our future mate in places we least expect.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, you capture the essence of the story:)
Comment from MissMerri
A truly nice story and written in such an interesting way. I think you have done very well with your English, though I noticed a few places that could be refined a little. For example, you wrote: "... and then I got mad and break up with him." I think you should say "broke up." Later you write: "but now I know you can't get thing without prescription." I think you meant to say "anything without a prescription." One last typo, I think:
"...and I just forgot about how (omit how) his looks and let myself be touched by his soul." This was a really sweet line.
You really do quite well with your English. Your story was so nice and truly fun to read. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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A truly nice story and written in such an interesting way. I think you have done very well with your English, though I noticed a few places that could be refined a little. For example, you wrote: "... and then I got mad and break up with him." I think you should say "broke up." Later you write: "but now I know you can't get thing without prescription." I think you meant to say "anything without a prescription." One last typo, I think:
"...and I just forgot about how (omit how) his looks and let myself be touched by his soul." This was a really sweet line.
You really do quite well with your English. Your story was so nice and truly fun to read. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much Miss Merry for the kind review and for taking a chance on my piece of family history.
Comment from Ben B.
"I told him to let me know when HE is back in Romania so I can return the money."
"We never MET in person."
This is a very touching story you have here.
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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"I told him to let me know when HE is back in Romania so I can return the money."
"We never MET in person."
This is a very touching story you have here.
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your touching review.
