Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine monorhyme and I enjoyed the ride on this ship here as the repeated sounds reminded me I was floating by, under the sky, bound for Dubai, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I love this stanza, no matter how sad it is, life most go on between the cracks of the ocean: 'A storm at sea is harsh, without lie -
the ocean's luck decides who will die.
God's mercy is needed, I imply,
to save a soul, not yet say goodbye,
and get safely home for apple pie.
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

Comment from Colin John

Excellent

Hi , I love everything about this poem about being caught in a storm, I don't think you could have picked a better painting from the many to choose from. Thanks for sharing and kind regards Colin

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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

Thanks very much for reviewing. I'm pleased you enjoyed the painting too.