As I Have Always Said
An ABC poem about an important rule of engagement16 total reviews
Comment from royowen
This is an outstanding entry in this ABC poetry contest, you even added the unnecessary E that really bolster the effort in this. The narrative was wonderful, the rhyming, flow and language were great, well done, Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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This is an outstanding entry in this ABC poetry contest, you even added the unnecessary E that really bolster the effort in this. The narrative was wonderful, the rhyming, flow and language were great, well done, Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review and especially for noticing the last line. Thank you so much for your thoughtful
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Well done
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this ABC contest entry poem you have stated an important rule of engagement; counter charge and counter claims will always be there; well said, thanks for sharing this; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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In this ABC contest entry poem you have stated an important rule of engagement; counter charge and counter claims will always be there; well said, thanks for sharing this; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your very thoughtful and encouraging review.
Comment from Andrelyn Izquierdo
If always is not the word to use that is often better to say than never. Then what would be its substitute that would seem more clever. Interesting interpretation.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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If always is not the word to use that is often better to say than never. Then what would be its substitute that would seem more clever. Interesting interpretation.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much. Your point is well taken.
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You're welcome. Good luck! :)
Comment from equestrik
This is such a simple truth but one it takes some time for folks to 'get'. As soon as you accuse with never, always etc. You have certainly gone down a rabbit hole. Good and wise write.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This is such a simple truth but one it takes some time for folks to 'get'. As soon as you accuse with never, always etc. You have certainly gone down a rabbit hole. Good and wise write.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from roof35
This short poem certainly has a strong and true message. It is well written with no errors. I especially like your opening line. This is very nicely done.
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This short poem certainly has a strong and true message. It is well written with no errors. I especially like your opening line. This is very nicely done.
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Writer. I like the rhyme scheme, the art choice, and the color scheme. Your message is a great point. That is a great take away.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Writer. I like the rhyme scheme, the art choice, and the color scheme. Your message is a great point. That is a great take away.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
