Comment from Justin Chopin

Excellent

A very well written story Scongrove. I thought the descriptions you used to describe the death of Brandon ie: the werewolves fangs going into his warm jugular were very vivid. Keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

Thank you, Justin :)

Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the kind words and review. I appreciate it!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by Justin Chopin on 04-Sep-2020

You're welcome Shana.

Comment from cdefan

Excellent

Very, very well written. I could see and feel the entire crash it was so well described. I finished the chapter wanting more. This author does a great job keeping me pulled into the story.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

Thank you, cdefan :)

I appreciate your time and for the great review! You made my day!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

This is another one of your abilities not only to write sensitive love scenes, of people tenderly being affectionate, but also the direct opposite, these scary scenes with unmentionable creatures seemingly without a soul, to terrorise and maim, then kill their victims without a qualm. Another supremely written piece Shana, blessings

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

Thank you, dear friend :)

I appreciate your encouraging review as always. I remember writing this one and oddly, it was very fun to imagine such a horrifying scene. I do love a scary story, but poor Brandon. Sorry... he had to go. Yikes!

Thanks again!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 03-Sep-2020

I?m afraid some have to be sacrificed. I understand, well done dear Shana,

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Great artwork, Ms Shana. Works great with your thrilling chapter!
The description was spot on, with details to bring the scene to life. You made it realistic in a way that kept me glued to the story all the way through.
Great writing!

Nate

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

Thanks so much, Nate :)

Glad you liked the artwork. I found it on Facebook and thought it would be great for this chapter. Thanks again for the great review!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

What a story. Your beginning brought your characters to life, made them seem realistic. relatable, a typical night, and then their terror begins. That part had me on the edge of my seat to the end. It was so well-written I could picture the ongoings in my mind. I'm so glad Tara was able to flee. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

Thanks so much, Mistydawn :)

So glad you liked the chapter. I do like writing scary scenes, especially werewolves. I hated to end Brandon, but sometimes characters just don't fit into the rest of the story... plus, Tara needs to meet one of my handsome Breedline men. Wink, wink. :)

Thanks again for all your support!
Stay safe and big hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

You captured well both Brandon and Tara's relationship as well as the horrible scenes which followed - building up well to each circumstance without over doing them. Each line kept me reading the next. Also, the accompanying artwork is awesome and really fits the story line wonderfully.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

I enjoyed hearing your approved of the scary scene. I did have fun creating this one. I hated to get rid of Brandon, but Tara has someone waiting for her among the Breedline crew. )

Thanks again for all your support. I appreciate you!
Stay safe and big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 03-Sep-2020

Sometimes one just has to get rid of a character in order to move the story along. I think you did a good job on his parting scene, as well as those that led up to it.
Hugs,
Faye

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Good

Poor Tara to witness the death of her friend and to run away to save her own life... probably this is going to follow for the rest of your life. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

Thank you, Iza :)

Glad you stepped into another Breedline adventure. I appreciate your time.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Here comes the significant supernatural fiction work with the fantastic taletelling, desperate and fast plot development, fostered by just a few realistic and contributory dialogues; both the beginning and the ending are catchy; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

Thank you, Alcreator :)

So glad to hear from you. Thanks for the encouraging words and the great review. Hope to hear from you again.

Sincerely,
Shana :)