Comment from dannyleonn

Excellent

Dazzling as usual! Not to mention I bubbled with laughter! My mother always said God has a sense of humor; however the truth of this subject sadly apparent. Humanity is suffering due to man's desires to conquer the world.

Just my take on it.

Thank you for sharing your insight.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

well just goes to show, you do have something interesting to say after all. if you kept your writes down to the bare minimum like you have done this one, perhaps people would really read what you have to say and not bull-shit you. Indie

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I like your use of personification
I don't understand the Lord's answer to the hills because of the wording
Brooke
what is a farce about man's humane role?
I also don't understand the meaning of the final line - what is the difference between men and humans?

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from poetic1988

Good

I like how this poem flows together
I also like the rhyming you have in the poetry as well
and the conversation flow between it
I wish there was more to this poem

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from Neelam Sangwai

Excellent

High virtues are rare so rising high is essential so that none will question about (hu)manliness of man. Compact words-contrast content! enjoyed.- Neelam

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from candi lester

Excellent

I liked this writing.......................... Thought it had wording ........................... and a good and meaningful point .................
you did well................
thanks for sharing with us
SWEETNESS FOREVER

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from Allison78

Excellent

This is such a very interesting poem. You give much to think about in such few words. Very profound. Well done on this poem!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A very well written short poem which says so much. I agree that in a world of violence and materialism, humanity is being lost~Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from Angels27

Excellent

A deeply philosophical 5-7-5. Extremely true last line...most men...few humans. There is a lot to ponder in the above writing. Looking forward to reading other chapters.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from Lulube

Excellent

Nice message for thought to the reader. Yes we all want the peace and kindness at every corner but to no avail. 3lines to say so much and it does.

Lulube

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013