O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from gazzagodbod
I often think what God must think as he looks down on the mess we have made of the world great thought provoking piece my friend gazza
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I often think what God must think as he looks down on the mess we have made of the world great thought provoking piece my friend gazza
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Hills ask God, "What's man?"
Lord says, "His humane role's farce."
Most men, few humans!
Although this is cleverly thoughtout, it's difficult to know what more one can say about a 3 line poem.
Margaret
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Hills ask God, "What's man?"
Lord says, "His humane role's farce."
Most men, few humans!
Although this is cleverly thoughtout, it's difficult to know what more one can say about a 3 line poem.
Margaret
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Kit Parker
This is a thought provoking haiku. Your ability to convey such an all encompassing judgment on mankind in so few words is at once a display of outstanding talent as a poet and heartbreaking insight as a man of God.
There is nothing I can offer to improve this piece. Structurally, it is a sound offering of the haiku style, i.e. 5-7-5 syllables. The message is, as I alluded above, clear and concise. It seems to me your work is imminently publishable and I pray for your success in bringing your wisdom and insights to the rest of the world. - PEACE -
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This is a thought provoking haiku. Your ability to convey such an all encompassing judgment on mankind in so few words is at once a display of outstanding talent as a poet and heartbreaking insight as a man of God.
There is nothing I can offer to improve this piece. Structurally, it is a sound offering of the haiku style, i.e. 5-7-5 syllables. The message is, as I alluded above, clear and concise. It seems to me your work is imminently publishable and I pray for your success in bringing your wisdom and insights to the rest of the world. - PEACE -
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Curt Mongold
I have to agree with the meaning of your cryptic words. There are many men, but few humans in this world, that is sure, and there will always be that disporportionate ratio until the time comes when we are elevated beyond the status of animal.
Curt
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I have to agree with the meaning of your cryptic words. There are many men, but few humans in this world, that is sure, and there will always be that disporportionate ratio until the time comes when we are elevated beyond the status of animal.
Curt
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Nebukadneser
Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! You are quite the philosopher , my man with your insightful and wise writing.
I love your writings and the messages you convey.
Well done you're a star
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
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Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! You are quite the philosopher , my man with your insightful and wise writing.
I love your writings and the messages you convey.
Well done you're a star
Cool bananas and warm regards
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from rjuselius
the role of men is to protect the universe, as i see it. humanity will overcome hatred in the face of god.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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the role of men is to protect the universe, as i see it. humanity will overcome hatred in the face of god.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Galactia
Lovely little 5'7'5 poem reflectibng nature and man's roll in it and his reflection within the eye's of god.
Great job
Regards
Tia
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Lovely little 5'7'5 poem reflectibng nature and man's roll in it and his reflection within the eye's of god.
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from amada
This one made me smile...broadly. I know that God has a great sense of humor. You say much in these three short lines. A venture in itself.
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This one made me smile...broadly. I know that God has a great sense of humor. You say much in these three short lines. A venture in itself.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from mtrybak
I'm looking forward to reading more of this to try to gain some insight as to where you ae going with this. I'm also hoping I'll learn something from you because my faith has taken nose dive and I wouldn't want to miss an opportunity to try to make myself have a better understanding. Thank you for this, even though I don't understand right now, maybe through time I will.
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I'm looking forward to reading more of this to try to gain some insight as to where you ae going with this. I'm also hoping I'll learn something from you because my faith has taken nose dive and I wouldn't want to miss an opportunity to try to make myself have a better understanding. Thank you for this, even though I don't understand right now, maybe through time I will.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from MelissaBickel
This makes me think about a time in the Bible where Job, in his pain and despair, spoke hastily and God had to remind him who the Creator of the heaven and stars was.
Humility is a must and it helps us to be less false if we practice it.
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This makes me think about a time in the Bible where Job, in his pain and despair, spoke hastily and God had to remind him who the Creator of the heaven and stars was.
Humility is a must and it helps us to be less false if we practice it.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
