O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written and you have made the readers think all using this form well done on a well presented piece regards Jill
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Hello my friend this is well written and you have made the readers think all using this form well done on a well presented piece regards Jill
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Bryana
This is different, very profound, it certainly
made me think. When I look at the hills I also
think, if they were human, what would they think
about us.
Very good poem 5-7-5, it meets the rules.
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This is different, very profound, it certainly
made me think. When I look at the hills I also
think, if they were human, what would they think
about us.
Very good poem 5-7-5, it meets the rules.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from EMB
This was a unique creation. It took me a while to realize it was in a 5-7-5 format. Most impressive. I must admit that the total message does escape me, though. I do like the concept of man and human being separate entities.
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This was a unique creation. It took me a while to realize it was in a 5-7-5 format. Most impressive. I must admit that the total message does escape me, though. I do like the concept of man and human being separate entities.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from TonyD
Great concept, distinguishing between man and human. The Lord would know the difference but most times we are in the dark.
Regards.
Tony
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Great concept, distinguishing between man and human. The Lord would know the difference but most times we are in the dark.
Regards.
Tony
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from hari anand
Hills ask God, "What's man?"
Lord says, "His humane role's farce."
Most men, few humans!
Touched, yes most men , only few humans, loved this one too.
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Hills ask God, "What's man?"
Lord says, "His humane role's farce."
Most men, few humans!
Touched, yes most men , only few humans, loved this one too.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Alcreator,
You have penned a 5/7/5 poem that is thought provoking and brilliant all at the same time. I like the personification of the hills and the well composed lines. Well done, chey
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Hi Alcreator,
You have penned a 5/7/5 poem that is thought provoking and brilliant all at the same time. I like the personification of the hills and the well composed lines. Well done, chey
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Papabearua
Nice little 5-7-5 about man and nature.
I have a question. In the second line do you mean humane or human? To me human is more logical, but it is your poem after all. Papa
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Nice little 5-7-5 about man and nature.
I have a question. In the second line do you mean humane or human? To me human is more logical, but it is your poem after all. Papa
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Tina McKala
THe same case as the one I reviewed a moment ago. I appreciate putting the dialogue into 5-7-5, that was innovatory, the message is there, but I still lack something, some images that I expect from this form.
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THe same case as the one I reviewed a moment ago. I appreciate putting the dialogue into 5-7-5, that was innovatory, the message is there, but I still lack something, some images that I expect from this form.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Janet Foor
Hills ask God, "what's man"?
Lord says, "His humane role's farce."
Most men, few humans!
Interesting - good last line.
Blessings
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Hills ask God, "what's man"?
Lord says, "His humane role's farce."
Most men, few humans!
Interesting - good last line.
Blessings
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey Al. Still trying to figure out what it is you're up to. You gonna tell me? Otherwise I shamefacedly admit to needing the buck fifty two. Actually I think we humans are kinda neat in our own way.
Hope your day goes well. Hope to hear back from you too!
Gloria
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Hey Al. Still trying to figure out what it is you're up to. You gonna tell me? Otherwise I shamefacedly admit to needing the buck fifty two. Actually I think we humans are kinda neat in our own way.
Hope your day goes well. Hope to hear back from you too!
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
