O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from JM daSilva
Well, I don't know what you mean. You got me there. I'm trying to decipher your poetry. I guess you mean that men are not humane. They pretend to be, but it's all a lie.
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Well, I don't know what you mean. You got me there. I'm trying to decipher your poetry. I guess you mean that men are not humane. They pretend to be, but it's all a lie.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Sure, there more men here on earth than human. human are godly, men are devilish in thought and deed. I can relate with what you mean here.
ola thomas
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Sure, there more men here on earth than human. human are godly, men are devilish in thought and deed. I can relate with what you mean here.
ola thomas
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from sunnilicious
Lovely artwork. Hills don't talk. They sing. Haven't you seen the Sound of Music?
Nicely done. Great job!
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Lovely artwork. Hills don't talk. They sing. Haven't you seen the Sound of Music?
Nicely done. Great job!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from Gungalo
Hills ask God, "What's man?"
Lord says, "His humane role's farce."
Most men, few humans!
The hills are asking about the role of man and God is answering them with a fierceness to his voice.
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Hills ask God, "What's man?"
Lord says, "His humane role's farce."
Most men, few humans!
The hills are asking about the role of man and God is answering them with a fierceness to his voice.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from mshugh
Wow - that was tricky - was trying to unravel the line with farce - then I read the foot notes - unsure of I understand the state-stand-status portion of the footnote, but enjoyed this peom because of the introspective provided
Michael
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Wow - that was tricky - was trying to unravel the line with farce - then I read the foot notes - unsure of I understand the state-stand-status portion of the footnote, but enjoyed this peom because of the introspective provided
Michael
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from cvcopac
That's good: a thought I'm familiar with and a definite judgement. I like the personification and the hills doing the question and the human as a second. Kenny
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That's good: a thought I'm familiar with and a definite judgement. I like the personification and the hills doing the question and the human as a second. Kenny
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from MM lives on :)
Alcreator Litt Dear thank you for the review I only wish I had a six star left for you. After reading your last poem which I've yet to review sorry been a busy I had to stop by and for sure wish you the best of luck though I doubt you'll have issues this was a great entry. Thank you for sharing..
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Alcreator Litt Dear thank you for the review I only wish I had a six star left for you. After reading your last poem which I've yet to review sorry been a busy I had to stop by and for sure wish you the best of luck though I doubt you'll have issues this was a great entry. Thank you for sharing..
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from muezza56
an interesting poem in the 5-7-5 style, on the authors faith and how his god may view mankind, nicely chosen accompanying pic
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an interesting poem in the 5-7-5 style, on the authors faith and how his god may view mankind, nicely chosen accompanying pic
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Isaac Kavik
NIcely written , short statement that I think few who know God and the state of the human racr today can dispute, thanks for posting and God bless.
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NIcely written , short statement that I think few who know God and the state of the human racr today can dispute, thanks for posting and God bless.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
