O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Rondeno
Humane, or human? The hills can talk? So if men are not humans, what are they? If God answers the hills, why won't He have a conversation with me?
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Humane, or human? The hills can talk? So if men are not humans, what are they? If God answers the hills, why won't He have a conversation with me?
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Comment from findinforest
Could not find meaning in this poem. Found it lazy, like you are trying to bluff the reader.
Hills ask God?
What does this mean, i could find no meaning in this line.
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Could not find meaning in this poem. Found it lazy, like you are trying to bluff the reader.
Hills ask God?
What does this mean, i could find no meaning in this line.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2006
Comment from pbearse
You have this right on...And most who really know what humane means are out here writing
things like this to spread a little Peace and caring around. A lot said in your Haiku
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You have this right on...And most who really know what humane means are out here writing
things like this to spread a little Peace and caring around. A lot said in your Haiku
Comment Written 15-Jul-2006
Comment from JoAnna Lee
Very Good
Unfortunately, how true!!!
Haiku done well
You might like "Humanity" a poem I wrote 35 years ago. Some of my thoughts have changed, but I have not elaborated on this poem yet. Check id out if you have time. I'd appreciate your response.
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
PS -- I'm the one who wanted a cool breeze yesterday. I live in Vermont on Lake Champlain.
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Very Good
Unfortunately, how true!!!
Haiku done well
You might like "Humanity" a poem I wrote 35 years ago. Some of my thoughts have changed, but I have not elaborated on this poem yet. Check id out if you have time. I'd appreciate your response.
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
PS -- I'm the one who wanted a cool breeze yesterday. I live in Vermont on Lake Champlain.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2006
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
Hills ask God, what's man? (Hills as God "What's man?"
Man's humane role's farce! He says ("Man's humane role's (you REALLY need an 'a' here, but it'll throw the count off. )farce!" He says.)
Most men, few humans!
Al, I'm sorry, but this one didn't make any sense at all.
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Hills ask God, what's man? (Hills as God "What's man?"
Man's humane role's farce! He says ("Man's humane role's (you REALLY need an 'a' here, but it'll throw the count off. )farce!" He says.)
Most men, few humans!
Al, I'm sorry, but this one didn't make any sense at all.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2006
Comment from RaymondJohn
This one I'm with you all the way. It's always fun to see a short work succeed because it is so difficult. Motion, form and instruction come together in pefect alignment. Best wishes. Ray.
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This one I'm with you all the way. It's always fun to see a short work succeed because it is so difficult. Motion, form and instruction come together in pefect alignment. Best wishes. Ray.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2006
Comment from drivenbackward
Mankind is responsible for destroying the Earth. They are nothing but greedy, selfish creatures, which has been proven by their actions as a whole. Only a few good ones are sprinkled throughout our population: humans.
Liked this one a lot.
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Mankind is responsible for destroying the Earth. They are nothing but greedy, selfish creatures, which has been proven by their actions as a whole. Only a few good ones are sprinkled throughout our population: humans.
Liked this one a lot.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2006
Comment from VICTIMEYES
Hills ask God, what's man?
Man's humane role's farce
i think you mean that man is no good and bad
He says
Most men, few humans!
God's optimistic and says theres a few good men left.???
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Hills ask God, what's man?
Man's humane role's farce
i think you mean that man is no good and bad
He says
Most men, few humans!
God's optimistic and says theres a few good men left.???
Comment Written 12-Jul-2006
Comment from MikeSamford
O Hills! by ALCREATOR WRITER
OK. Writer you got me on this one, made me think Oo... the pain! Yes I think you point out very well, in the tone of this short yet pointed penning, not all men act human, and use this as a metaphor for evil, I can find no fault in this thinking, or poetry.
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O Hills! by ALCREATOR WRITER
OK. Writer you got me on this one, made me think Oo... the pain! Yes I think you point out very well, in the tone of this short yet pointed penning, not all men act human, and use this as a metaphor for evil, I can find no fault in this thinking, or poetry.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2006
Comment from National Scholar
Hills tall gaze at sky
God says man's humane earth roles
Few muses white, dark
Brief but bold. Message moral. Interesting that Hills (allegorically) ask God about man's moral duties. Only a few muses white or moral and mostly go for dark. Symbolic and considerate message is clear to understand. Excellent Haiku.
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Hills tall gaze at sky
God says man's humane earth roles
Few muses white, dark
Brief but bold. Message moral. Interesting that Hills (allegorically) ask God about man's moral duties. Only a few muses white or moral and mostly go for dark. Symbolic and considerate message is clear to understand. Excellent Haiku.
Comment Written 16-May-2006
