Comment from prayingpoet

Average

While this does follow a 5-7-5 rule, I simply don't understand what you are driving home. I THNK you might be saying that man is a farce...if so, then maybe I get it?

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Very nice rendition of God's creation speaking to Him and having it to speak back. Like the way you make you readers think about your writings.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

Comment from ravenblack

Average

most men, few humans! I don't think i'm dense. all I can say is, huh? and humane role's farce? you really need to think before you write, make sure everything makes sense

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for such a great review... appreciate your wisdom... know you are a versatile reviewer and writer... so nice you ever speak the truth... but please stop reviewing my works... truly speaking i do not want to see my works reviewed by you... please escape me... hope you would never mind for this... i do not want your reviews any more... hope you would honour my request... truly i feel sick receiving your reviews on my works...

Comment from jppoet

Average

I sense there is more sweetness, sincerity and sympathy here
but I find the road obscure. While the photo is nice, its red color does not reveal itelf unto my failing eyes. Larger please in blackness will say its every word. If I see tHis correctly --maybe not-- do I see it as a CHAPTER 9?
iF IT IS, how are we supposed to GUESS what happened in the PRIOR 8 chapters??? Give us some BACKGROUND or AUTHOR'S NOTES!! yOU MUST THINK AS THE READER, NOT AS THE WRITER.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for review...
it was an independent chapter of the book...
site does not encourage author notes like some reviewers who feel awkward getting or seeing author notes...
thank you once again for trying and writing nice feedback...

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

The writer does a good job of getting the point across. The writer taps into the mind of the reader putting the readers mind to work. The message is clear and to the point as the writer delivers a message that's thought provoking.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for excellent review

Comment from allborn66

Good

I think the form was a bit too restrictive for you to communicate your theme. I would not have understood what you wanted to communicate without the Author's note.
Barbara

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for review...
site does not encourage author notes like some reviewers who feel awkward getting or seeing author notes...
thank you once again for trying...

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, alcreator , you did a great job writing this 15 word poem about the difference between man and humane. i enjoyed reading this one.....

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

I followed this until the very last line. You lost me with that one. He never answered the question. The last line mentions man and human, but if they aren't defined, the question isn't answered. But here's a five for spending SO MUCH to pump this up the a record amount.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for excellent review

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

AC - your work fits the 5-7-5 form. Strong religious work
Thank you for sharing.
Maureen

"Hills ask God, "What's man?" 5
Lord says, "His humane role's farce." 7
Most men, few humans!" 5

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for excellent review

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Good

I am really lost in the hills on this my friend..Maybe it is just to far over my head to understand the meaning of what you are saying sorry
TK

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for honest feedback...