O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Pj Dennison
As indigenous people, we personify the attributes of the earth. We have the human nation, the animal nation, and the plant nation, etc. Our goal is to take care of what God or the Great Spirit has provided for us. Your poem is the TRUTH. You gave out a phenomenal message in so few words.
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As indigenous people, we personify the attributes of the earth. We have the human nation, the animal nation, and the plant nation, etc. Our goal is to take care of what God or the Great Spirit has provided for us. Your poem is the TRUTH. You gave out a phenomenal message in so few words.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
We're supposedly made in the image and likeness of God, but I realise now that image is a little in distinct, I'm sure God doesn't riot or get sick, well done, good job, blessings Roy
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We're supposedly made in the image and likeness of God, but I realise now that image is a little in distinct, I'm sure God doesn't riot or get sick, well done, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
Hi, Alcreator Litt Dear, such a depth of meaning encompassed in so few words. Being a homo sapien, or neanderthal des not aways presuppose humanity in itself. Great comment on mans relationship with his surroundings.
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Hi, Alcreator Litt Dear, such a depth of meaning encompassed in so few words. Being a homo sapien, or neanderthal des not aways presuppose humanity in itself. Great comment on mans relationship with his surroundings.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from L. Sherman
A lot to say and managed in a few well-chosen words. A great image but almost at a disconnect from how the poem resounded with me. It's almost sardonic to me. Perhaps it's just the mood I'm in today. Hm. Anyway, nicely penned.
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A lot to say and managed in a few well-chosen words. A great image but almost at a disconnect from how the poem resounded with me. It's almost sardonic to me. Perhaps it's just the mood I'm in today. Hm. Anyway, nicely penned.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Supe
I like this short well thought out 5-7-5, which is a perfect syllable count. The picture you chose complements your words well. I am glad the background was there to give us an idea of your work. Well done.
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I like this short well thought out 5-7-5, which is a perfect syllable count. The picture you chose complements your words well. I am glad the background was there to give us an idea of your work. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from P1
this is the first piece i have read from you and
i really enjoyed it. you really said so much with
such a few words
the picture you chose is amazing too
i will read your words again and thanks
for sharing
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this is the first piece i have read from you and
i really enjoyed it. you really said so much with
such a few words
the picture you chose is amazing too
i will read your words again and thanks
for sharing
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from mermaids
The hills become a live character in your words and ask God about humans. I like this image of nature questioning God, for nature has reasons to ask God about humans.
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The hills become a live character in your words and ask God about humans. I like this image of nature questioning God, for nature has reasons to ask God about humans.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from MizKat
Alcreator Litt Dear - I liked your short, sweet, and to the point poem. It's written well and tell a message we should all hear. Kat
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Alcreator Litt Dear - I liked your short, sweet, and to the point poem. It's written well and tell a message we should all hear. Kat
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Norbanus
Another short verse
and a meaningful story
to share your wisdom
Man thinks that all things
are under his dominance
like global warming
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Another short verse
and a meaningful story
to share your wisdom
Man thinks that all things
are under his dominance
like global warming
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Bill Schott
There is an interesting concept that we are an infestation on earth and that the planet is judging us as possessing qualities worthy of remaining.
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There is an interesting concept that we are an infestation on earth and that the planet is judging us as possessing qualities worthy of remaining.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
