Comment from Laurie Holding

Excellent

This was a hilarious use of artwork and great words in such a confined form. Are you reading the book now that it's out? I didn't pre-order, but plan to get to it soon. Good luck on the contest; you got my vote!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020

Thanks! Yes, I am reading it. I have it in my kindle. Yes, do get it. Thanks for the encouragement! I hope to win.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-5-3, Pre-order, has the proper formatting and promotes this actual book with the gory picture of an otherwise innocuous, sliced pomegranate. The allusion to, perhaps, vampires is definitely possible.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
thanks for sharing your notes.
-It's good to have special
authors and books we like to read.
-The syllable count and topic are good.
-Good description and effective
use of one continuous thought.
-A positive message about
getting books.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020

Thanks! I have fixed the mistake. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! :)

reply by Pam (respa) on 31-Aug-2020

You are very welcome. I changed the review for you. Did you add the message in red at the end of the book title or did it come that way? Just curious.

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020

It came that way. Thank you, my friend!

reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Sep-2020

Thanks for sharing.