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Joy comes in the morning38 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Joy comes in the morning if we open our eyes and heart to see. You describe that beauty so well, and rightly attribute it to Jehovah God.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Joy comes in the morning if we open our eyes and heart to see. You describe that beauty so well, and rightly attribute it to Jehovah God.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
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You're welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You are confident and have faith in God, you know howsoever dark and dangerous the night and the environment may be, the morning sun will smile next day, you will act as Savior; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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You are confident and have faith in God, you know howsoever dark and dangerous the night and the environment may be, the morning sun will smile next day, you will act as Savior; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review ALCREATOR.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Being able to view the beauty of His handiwork is a blessing any day, especially when you experience a day such as this. I love the beautiful and descriptive wording you use to paint this scene for us. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Being able to view the beauty of His handiwork is a blessing any day, especially when you experience a day such as this. I love the beautiful and descriptive wording you use to paint this scene for us. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review Jeffrey.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a beautiful verse, well matched by the glorious picture.
Well rhymed and nicely written, this describes a beautiful morning scene very well.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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I think this is a beautiful verse, well matched by the glorious picture.
Well rhymed and nicely written, this describes a beautiful morning scene very well.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review Sharon.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from RodG
You have done a wonderful job of conveying the message of Psalm 30:5 in your poem. You describe the Speaker's trip down the mountain to the sea vividly. Especially noteworthy is your description of the morning sun in stanza one. I also applaud your use of ABCB rhyming.
Rod
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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You have done a wonderful job of conveying the message of Psalm 30:5 in your poem. You describe the Speaker's trip down the mountain to the sea vividly. Especially noteworthy is your description of the morning sun in stanza one. I also applaud your use of ABCB rhyming.
Rod
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review Rod.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Pam (respa)
-That is a gorgeous image,
and nice presentation, Janet.
-A well written poem to go with it.
-Very good imagery and rhyme
that paints a vivid word picture:
"This creamy yellow stream of mellow light."
-The mood is refreshing and pleasant:
"An eagle glides with grace into its light."
-A very good conclusion, too.
-I enjoyed your poem and appreciate
the good thoughts.
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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-That is a gorgeous image,
and nice presentation, Janet.
-A well written poem to go with it.
-Very good imagery and rhyme
that paints a vivid word picture:
"This creamy yellow stream of mellow light."
-The mood is refreshing and pleasant:
"An eagle glides with grace into its light."
-A very good conclusion, too.
-I enjoyed your poem and appreciate
the good thoughts.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review Pam.
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome, Janet. What was the artwork you used? It was stunning.
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I actually found this one on Google but the poem was inspired by a painting (very similar) by Norman Lowell of Anchor Point, Alaska. He has a gallery there and my grandson is the curator. You can look Norman up on line and see a tour of his gallery with my grandson doing the narration of a tour. Norman is now in his late 80s and legally blind but his artwork is divine. Thank you for asking.
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Thanks, Janet. This is an amazing story. It sounds like your grandson has a good opportunity, although I guess museum's aren't open yet. I wonder if health issues are better in Alaska?
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They are better in Alaska. One grandson got married in Wilmington NC and the family wore masks and only a fraction of the family could attend. Another grandson got married in Fairbanks Alaska, no masks and lots of family and friends could attend.
The gallery is trying to get by by hosting virtual tours and selling prints on line. Hope next year is better for them.
Stay safe and well.
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Thanks for sharing, Janet. I looked at some of the paintings and they are gorgeous. I think we all want things to be better soon!!
Comment from equestrik
What a stunning photograph! You writing goes so well with it . I was looking for the eagle! One of the best things about this write is your positively about each new day!
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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What a stunning photograph! You writing goes so well with it . I was looking for the eagle! One of the best things about this write is your positively about each new day!
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mastery
Very inspiring poetry, Janet. You have painted so many morning pictures that we all may see and not appreciate fully as we should. I liked these lines especially:
"Those predawn shadows quickly are erased
when Sol brings vibrant glory to the day."
Good writing from start to finish, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Very inspiring poetry, Janet. You have painted so many morning pictures that we all may see and not appreciate fully as we should. I liked these lines especially:
"Those predawn shadows quickly are erased
when Sol brings vibrant glory to the day."
Good writing from start to finish, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review Bob and for the special six star rating. And thanks for sharing your favorite lines.
Blessings
Janet
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Good job, my friend. Bob
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Good job, my friend. Bob
