Thunder
A warning that lightning might strike.3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
And to turn our computers off... :) Love your use of the word 'thunder' for your acrostic -- an awesome presentation 'in a word'! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
And to turn our computers off... :) Love your use of the word 'thunder' for your acrostic -- an awesome presentation 'in a word'! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Thank you Y.M. for reading my poem and for the very nice review.
I'm glad someone else liked it.
When I wrote this poem, we were having a severe thunderstorm. You talk about a story coming to you by ?
Thanks again,
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LOL!! Got it - lightning strikes! ;) :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
We should not merely use umbrellas at the thunderstorm, lightning; warning is well given for saving from storms; well said; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
We should not merely use umbrellas at the thunderstorm, lightning; warning is well given for saving from storms; well said; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you Alcreator for reading one of my poems and for the very nice review. Stay safe!
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Comment from Andrelyn Izquierdo
Good acrostic poem as it tells a story down the line. I like it. Good job on depicting the warning of the word through the single sentence storyline. I can see the people scatter who do not have umbrellas trying to take cover while a collective few whip theirs out in unison above their heads.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
Good acrostic poem as it tells a story down the line. I like it. Good job on depicting the warning of the word through the single sentence storyline. I can see the people scatter who do not have umbrellas trying to take cover while a collective few whip theirs out in unison above their heads.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Andrelyn,
Thank you for reading one of my poems, and for the very nice review.
I'm new to this process, but it is nice to receive reviews for my works.
Thanks again,
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You're very welcome.