Summer Nights
Sounds in the Summer21 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I love this symphony and love these band members. There are cute and very capable. You are right on target for an acrostic poem with the first letter and the sound.
Exceptionally done.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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I love this symphony and love these band members. There are cute and very capable. You are right on target for an acrostic poem with the first letter and the sound.
Exceptionally done.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you so so much!! I appreciate the stars and your thoughts!
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Thank you so so much!! I appreciate the stars and your thoughts!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Tina Crute,
Nice piece of poetry in the form of an Acrostic Poem meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and transparently depicting its theme.
Contest winner!
CONGRATULATIONS!!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Hello Tina Crute,
Nice piece of poetry in the form of an Acrostic Poem meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and transparently depicting its theme.
Contest winner!
CONGRATULATIONS!!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you, RP! This review means a lot. Your review is as eloquent as poetry:)
Tina
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Tina Crute, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your use of the literary technique of alliteration will draw the reader in. The fun part of this poem is how much use of another literary technique, onomatopoeia there is. You have effected the sounds of the night populaton. For readers who have never have had such a night life experience, they can have a little sense with your choice of words.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Your use of the literary technique of alliteration will draw the reader in. The fun part of this poem is how much use of another literary technique, onomatopoeia there is. You have effected the sounds of the night populaton. For readers who have never have had such a night life experience, they can have a little sense with your choice of words.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Wow, Liz, thank you! I enjoyed your review because you were specific about what technique you enjoyed That means a lot and helps me a lot!
Comment from amada
This is a very nice and original season's acrostic poem. It reads very well. I so like moonlight lullabies...Soft and very enchanting melodies. It was a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This is a very nice and original season's acrostic poem. It reads very well. I so like moonlight lullabies...Soft and very enchanting melodies. It was a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Aw, thank you, Amada! I am glad you liked it! Thank you for giving me your thoughts. You saying, enchanting melodies ... makes me want to go camping and listen to them.
Comment from elchupakabra
It's filed under stories as opposed to poems so that's my only real comment but the piece as a poem is well done. Great work and best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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It's filed under stories as opposed to poems so that's my only real comment but the piece as a poem is well done. Great work and best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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I have been trying, but it is not letting click on poetry. Not sure why. Thanks for letting me know though! It is listed in the contest where its supposed to be. Thank you for reviewing and giving me stars!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the
Seasons acrostic writing prompt contest. Good words and connection between lines that improve the flow. Nice Summer imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the
Seasons acrostic writing prompt contest. Good words and connection between lines that improve the flow. Nice Summer imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Gypsy, thank you so much, It was a fun one to write because I love nature. Thanks for the good luck wish too! :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I really like your poem, too.
-It has a good rhythm and imagery.
-You capture the spirit of the
forest creatures very well:
"N octurnal owls join in with HOO's"
"T he croaking of the chorus frogs"
-I really like your poem and hope
you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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-Great image.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I really like your poem, too.
-It has a good rhythm and imagery.
-You capture the spirit of the
forest creatures very well:
"N octurnal owls join in with HOO's"
"T he croaking of the chorus frogs"
-I really like your poem and hope
you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Aw, Pam, thank you so much!! I had fun doing it, but you just gave me a big bonus! Thanks for telling me specifically what you noticed. I appreciate it !
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You are very welcome and deserving. I voted for you; I hope it sticks!
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Aww...thank you! I hope it sticks too!
have a good, rest of the evening and a good day tomorrow!
Tina
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I guess it did, Tina😊 You have a great day and enjoy your success.
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Haha. I guess that means I am learning from the best! Pray for me today? Going to see someone very dear before she goes to heaven. Who knew a heart could feel this heavy?
I appreciate you!
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I will do that, Tina. I am sorry about your friend, but I know you will provide comfort for her.
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Thank you Pam. She passed away minutes before I got to her.:(
I just came on here as a diversion today. I appreciate you much.
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I am sorry, Tina, but maybe she sensed that you would. There have been strange stories sometimes of what people think or hear before they pass on. Take care of yourself.
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You may be right. She spared me. Even down to her last breath, she was a saint through and through. :)
I will write about her. That will help.
She was actually like a second Momma to me. I called her Momma Dillard and her husband, Daddy Dillard. Them's some good people!
God blessed me with them.
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Thanks for sharing, Tina. I was wondering who the Dillards were. They sound like people you can lean on, too. I think it will help writing about her, and she would like that.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Seasons acrostic contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Seasons acrostic contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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That is a comment no one has told me yet, so I appreciate the comment. I am glad it was easily understood. Thanks for the good luck wishes too. I really thank you!
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I voted for this entry!
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Why, thank you. That means a bunch!
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You're quite welcome!
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:)
Comment from Veenbee
Very nice poem. Many of my summer nights I stayed awake because the crickets were too loud. And if I heard any movements from the nocturnals, I prayed they weren't close. If only I had seen it as a beautiful symphony played just for me I might have slept better. LOL Great job. Veenbee
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Very nice poem. Many of my summer nights I stayed awake because the crickets were too loud. And if I heard any movements from the nocturnals, I prayed they weren't close. If only I had seen it as a beautiful symphony played just for me I might have slept better. LOL Great job. Veenbee
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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haha...now you make me wanting to go camping so I can hear the singing too! It was fun, so I really do appreciate you giving me your thoughts:)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is an excellent acrostic poem--vividly descriptive, with an appealing variety of strong nouns and adjectives; skillfully composed, with good rhythm and rhyme.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This is an excellent acrostic poem--vividly descriptive, with an appealing variety of strong nouns and adjectives; skillfully composed, with good rhythm and rhyme.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Janice, thank you for reviewing my poem. It was so fun to do! I appreciate your assessment!
