Comment from AvoloreArundo

Excellent

Great Haiku! It had a nice flow and sound to it. The words were interesting and it was fun to "decode it".

Thanks for sharing!

Avolore

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2006

Comment from tuskantail

Excellent

So much has been said in so few words. I love where you write, that love can change huts into love homes and hearts sing. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2006

Comment from rivki1111

Excellent

Hello, this is a very lovely poem that has been published so well. I thought your careful word choice maximizes the effect for the reader and creates a lot of feeling with very few words.

Dense but charming....thanks for sharing your poem with me, it was a pleasure to read and review, cheers rivki

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2006

Comment from Brindle

Excellent

This is absolutely lovely, AW. Love does indeed transform all it touches. The sounds and images alone would have been beautiful enough, but your explanations imbue this with an extra layer of meaning. Thanks.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2006

Comment from bluetwo

Excellent

I'm sure this is exactly what you wanted to say, but i felt it needed too much explanation in your notes. I had a rough time getting any images or feelings from this poem.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2006

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

This is a very good haiku poem in which you have done really well the presentation is very good very bright I enjoyed regards Fuller

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2006

Comment from Nanette Mary

Excellent

Hullo Alcreator Writer ....
It is amazing how much can be said with so few words. I see this as being comparable with a miniature painting ..... very small but, on looking closer .... on looking into this painting with words .... the reader can see so many different colours and aspects of your theme.
With love from ... Nanette Mary.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2006

Comment from jackiesmuse

Excellent

Vale Cupid you see!
How highland huts grow love homes!
Hearts flow notes, they sing!

Metaphorically appealing.
Moving and vivid imagery in so few words.
Less is more.

I enjoyed this haiku. They are so difficult to do master.

Thank you for sharing,
Jackie

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2006

Comment from proudgranny

Excellent

I really liked this poem. I loved the way you say *highland huts grow love homes*. We can learn a lot from this poem about love and the acheivement it brings. Great Job!

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2006

Comment from Patty Mazzurco

Excellent

Great job, perfect syllable count and the imagery was vivid and moving. I love the way you make these look so easy. Another outstanding Haiku...

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2006