O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from luna
Alcreator Writer, you are becoming the best at the haiku! This was extremely pleasurable in its message and the format, as far as I could tell, was perfect. I wrote one Haiku some time ago, and it was not as easy as it looks. My hat is off to you.
Yours,
Luna *smile*
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Alcreator Writer, you are becoming the best at the haiku! This was extremely pleasurable in its message and the format, as far as I could tell, was perfect. I wrote one Haiku some time ago, and it was not as easy as it looks. My hat is off to you.
Yours,
Luna *smile*
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from Mzhurst
Vale Cupid you see!
How highland huts grow love homes!
Hearts flow notes, they sing!
I have to admit my ignorance, which isn't difficult, but this style is alian to me. Of course, most poetry is alian to me. so i can only say it follows form. LOL
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Vale Cupid you see!
How highland huts grow love homes!
Hearts flow notes, they sing!
I have to admit my ignorance, which isn't difficult, but this style is alian to me. Of course, most poetry is alian to me. so i can only say it follows form. LOL
Comment Written 02-Jun-2006
Comment from gerry26
I never have seen this style before, but I really do like it.
The feelings that you put in such a short piece is truely amazing.
Good Flow and emotion
gerry
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I never have seen this style before, but I really do like it.
The feelings that you put in such a short piece is truely amazing.
Good Flow and emotion
gerry
Comment Written 02-Jun-2006
Comment from joboofoo
Very nice
The whole idea of highland people singing love notes and that the lowland cupid should take note was compressed very nicely into a very small package
It even seemed to have a nice litte flow to it.
A very nice job indeed.
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Very nice
The whole idea of highland people singing love notes and that the lowland cupid should take note was compressed very nicely into a very small package
It even seemed to have a nice litte flow to it.
A very nice job indeed.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2006
Comment from ScarletAffliction
This one appeals to me because I think it is love that makes a home. Humble or no. :) You're going to rise to the top with these quick pieces in no time. Let me know if I'm missing anything up there when you get there, will you? ;) There's a good boy.
Scarlet
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This one appeals to me because I think it is love that makes a home. Humble or no. :) You're going to rise to the top with these quick pieces in no time. Let me know if I'm missing anything up there when you get there, will you? ;) There's a good boy.
Scarlet
Comment Written 02-Jun-2006
Comment from Irina
What a charming and vivid haiku!
I adore this one and thank you for sharing such a beautiful and vivid writing!
You give me a happy feeling,ALCREATOR WRITER!
I am waiting to read new haikus of your!
Irina
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What a charming and vivid haiku!
I adore this one and thank you for sharing such a beautiful and vivid writing!
You give me a happy feeling,ALCREATOR WRITER!
I am waiting to read new haikus of your!
Irina
Comment Written 02-Jun-2006
Comment from qmusnsailor
I like your style, it has its own unique way. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for taking your time to make a good write.
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I like your style, it has its own unique way. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for taking your time to make a good write.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2006
Comment from volunteer angel
As a haiku I see no problem here. It's short and I read it three times to be sure of the meaning. I have no idea where the Upland people live, but surmise it's in Africa. No matter where you live, when you're in love, you feel like singing. So I can see that's the idea of this poem. Nice job! V.A.
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As a haiku I see no problem here. It's short and I read it three times to be sure of the meaning. I have no idea where the Upland people live, but surmise it's in Africa. No matter where you live, when you're in love, you feel like singing. So I can see that's the idea of this poem. Nice job! V.A.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2006
Comment from AmoksSoulmate
Excellent Haiku. Every word hold so much meaning throughout this piece. Your author's notes were invaluable in the full interpretation of this great well written piece. Thank you for sharing.
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Excellent Haiku. Every word hold so much meaning throughout this piece. Your author's notes were invaluable in the full interpretation of this great well written piece. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2006
Comment from minopavlic
Wow,you have managed to capture within your gifted expressionalism,the beauty and mysticism within the power of love.Although very simplistic with so very few words,a story within itself
no_obstacle
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Wow,you have managed to capture within your gifted expressionalism,the beauty and mysticism within the power of love.Although very simplistic with so very few words,a story within itself
no_obstacle
Comment Written 02-Jun-2006
