O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Emily_69
Great Haiku with perfect form. Author's notes allowed for clarity on certain lines. This poem tells me that any house/"hut" is not a home without love. It's the love and warmth of the family that make a home. Beautiful piece!!
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Great Haiku with perfect form. Author's notes allowed for clarity on certain lines. This poem tells me that any house/"hut" is not a home without love. It's the love and warmth of the family that make a home. Beautiful piece!!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2006
Comment from Missy01
How cool. It took a minute but wow I really like this. It is so fun to read and I like the picture you have painted of the land people and the love they make and show. At least I hope I got it cause I sure loved what I saw. lol Missy01
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How cool. It took a minute but wow I really like this. It is so fun to read and I like the picture you have painted of the land people and the love they make and show. At least I hope I got it cause I sure loved what I saw. lol Missy01
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from Ponder
Hi Alcreator Writer,
Well this one is hard to figure out, I think it is the highland huts thing that has me flumoxed here. as with all your poems, this is well put together and intrigueing. perhaps the fact that English is not your first language stands to you when you create these Haikus.
Ponder (is Pondering)
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Hi Alcreator Writer,
Well this one is hard to figure out, I think it is the highland huts thing that has me flumoxed here. as with all your poems, this is well put together and intrigueing. perhaps the fact that English is not your first language stands to you when you create these Haikus.
Ponder (is Pondering)
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from IndianaIrish
A truly amazing haiku, AL. I've written a few haiku in the past and indeed it's difficult to find the words you want to say with limited syllables. But you make it seem easy. Love does make our hearts sing, AL. Thanks for writing this :>)
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A truly amazing haiku, AL. I've written a few haiku in the past and indeed it's difficult to find the words you want to say with limited syllables. But you make it seem easy. Love does make our hearts sing, AL. Thanks for writing this :>)
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from Sue_Angel
Unusual haiku. Your piece inspires me to go back to my English books and dust off the rules of haiku.
I like the way you've expressed so much in just a few words. Ending each line with an exclamation point was also a unique idea.
Regards,
Sue
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Unusual haiku. Your piece inspires me to go back to my English books and dust off the rules of haiku.
I like the way you've expressed so much in just a few words. Ending each line with an exclamation point was also a unique idea.
Regards,
Sue
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from terryangelo
Your verse was a wonderful reminder of hiking in the Scottish highlands and air that felt like velvet against my skin. No wonder love grows in such beauty.
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Your verse was a wonderful reminder of hiking in the Scottish highlands and air that felt like velvet against my skin. No wonder love grows in such beauty.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from Wendyanne
With just a few well chosen words you say so much in this well written haiku AW. I like the message that you are trying to convey. Thanks for sharing this delight.
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With just a few well chosen words you say so much in this well written haiku AW. I like the message that you are trying to convey. Thanks for sharing this delight.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from Pseudoname
A W,
Your intellectual approach to writing poetry has you on a higher plane than most ascend to. The difficulties for most who attempt haiku are technical; you overcome the strict limitations of the art form with seemingly effortless elan!
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A W,
Your intellectual approach to writing poetry has you on a higher plane than most ascend to. The difficulties for most who attempt haiku are technical; you overcome the strict limitations of the art form with seemingly effortless elan!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from Pnpebbles
Well done. You delivered a message in very few words. Your format was easy to read. Thank you for adding the author's notes as it provided a deeper understanding of your piece. I find it a challenge to use this format but you have made it look easy. Again, well done.
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Well done. You delivered a message in very few words. Your format was easy to read. Thank you for adding the author's notes as it provided a deeper understanding of your piece. I find it a challenge to use this format but you have made it look easy. Again, well done.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
Comment from Tuala
My computer stumbled me upon your poem, as I tend to read stories. However, I saw your name and knew I loved your reviews. I had to take a moment to reflect on your haiku.
I'm not a poet, I leave that talent to my daughter. But it did sing to me.
Thanks for sharing.
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My computer stumbled me upon your poem, as I tend to read stories. However, I saw your name and knew I loved your reviews. I had to take a moment to reflect on your haiku.
I'm not a poet, I leave that talent to my daughter. But it did sing to me.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2006
