O My God and Mother Nature!
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Oh Vale!"Appreciation of God and Mother Nature
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Comment from Jewell McChesney
What an absolutely wonderful poem.
Short and to the point packed full of imagery.
Loved it.
I want to go ...
Nothin' like the glory of Colorado's beauty.
Jj
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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What an absolutely wonderful poem.
Short and to the point packed full of imagery.
Loved it.
I want to go ...
Nothin' like the glory of Colorado's beauty.
Jj
Comment Written 20-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for fantastic review
sorry for late
Comment from hollydee
Great poem and wow, what a breathtaking picture! I never cease to be amazed at the beauty in our world, even amidst all the filth, evil and vast number of uncaring hearts. Your poem is charming--- cupid, love and hearts!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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Great poem and wow, what a breathtaking picture! I never cease to be amazed at the beauty in our world, even amidst all the filth, evil and vast number of uncaring hearts. Your poem is charming--- cupid, love and hearts!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006
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THANKS FOR THIS WONDERFUL REVIEW I APPRECIATE.
YOUR MODE OF LITERARY APPRECIATION IS COMMENDABLE.
Comment from joyshri
Short, loaded with meaning and classical reference. A very unusual poem but then I often feel cheated when one of my favourite poets does not give me more to chew on! But it is incredible in form, structure, word use and inference.Joyshri
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Short, loaded with meaning and classical reference. A very unusual poem but then I often feel cheated when one of my favourite poets does not give me more to chew on! But it is incredible in form, structure, word use and inference.Joyshri
Comment Written 06-Jun-2006
Comment from Riyoun
Very good. I liked the meaning. Also I always admire people who can get their points across in small poems. It flowed very well. Great job.
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Very good. I liked the meaning. Also I always admire people who can get their points across in small poems. It flowed very well. Great job.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2006
Comment from WXYZebra
Direct, and to the point. Now I normally wouldn't give such a short poem five stars but your words have great meaning. I'd like to read some more of your work.
06/06/06 by: XYZebra
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Direct, and to the point. Now I normally wouldn't give such a short poem five stars but your words have great meaning. I'd like to read some more of your work.
06/06/06 by: XYZebra
Comment Written 06-Jun-2006
Comment from mblundell68
Beauty changes huts into love homes!
Oh Vale!;
Vale Cupid you see!
How highland huts grow love homes!
Hearts flow notes, they sing! (I had to write it; to understand it; short up complex)
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Beauty changes huts into love homes!
Oh Vale!;
Vale Cupid you see!
How highland huts grow love homes!
Hearts flow notes, they sing! (I had to write it; to understand it; short up complex)
Comment Written 06-Jun-2006
Comment from Norbanus
Interesting to note
The use of words I don't know
Like hut for people
New words to my list
I find a few in your work
to add every day
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Interesting to note
The use of words I don't know
Like hut for people
New words to my list
I find a few in your work
to add every day
Comment Written 06-Jun-2006
Comment from rl dubour
Oh Vale! If I am to follow this correctly which I probably won't I am seeing val as the valley and as the highland or upland people view Cupid they know that soon will bring delightful things and this makes anyone smile. Excellent work Ron
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Oh Vale! If I am to follow this correctly which I probably won't I am seeing val as the valley and as the highland or upland people view Cupid they know that soon will bring delightful things and this makes anyone smile. Excellent work Ron
Comment Written 06-Jun-2006
Comment from Alchera
Eros lives, reigns and governs the universe of this well built haiku/senryu kingly crowned where all his universal melodies and sweet noctural tunes are sungin celestial light and peace!
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Eros lives, reigns and governs the universe of this well built haiku/senryu kingly crowned where all his universal melodies and sweet noctural tunes are sungin celestial light and peace!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2006
Comment from Sam Manilla
Yup, it's a haiku with its 5 syllables, 7 syllables and then 5 again. By using words like Vale and highland it has the nature them that haikus are normally attributed with It's a little confusing what you are trying to say but it seems like a celebration with singing. Thank you for the high payout for such a short poem.
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Yup, it's a haiku with its 5 syllables, 7 syllables and then 5 again. By using words like Vale and highland it has the nature them that haikus are normally attributed with It's a little confusing what you are trying to say but it seems like a celebration with singing. Thank you for the high payout for such a short poem.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2006
