Comment from Dear Essay Reviewer

Excellent

It has a nice calling to Cupid the God of Love.
People at upland sing love song at Vale calling and huts grow now as love homes.
It has an excellent metaphoric appeal.

 Comment Written 16-May-2006

Comment from Swtdreamz

Excellent

Vale Cupid you see!
How upland huts grow love homes
Hearts flow notes, they sing - i like cupid- or "eros"- i'm just addicted to greek mythology so- 5 stars!! haha j/k-
but yeah this short piece was cute
good job

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2006

Comment from chelsmor

Excellent

I admire this poem, this form I could never do, pack just the right words
into just the right tiny space. My hat is off to you.
The vale is such an fun and uplifting word to use juxtaposed to the
upland huts making homes full of love
and the songs they sing from their happiness there, with Cupid's heart
woven throughout.
Excellent write.
Chelsmor

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2006

Comment from GRACEANNMCCLUNG

Excellent

I LOVED THIS! I could see the little Leprachans and Cupids running all over the story. I felt I was in a fantasy. I wish to thank you for this poem. I wish you all the luck of the Irish as they say. Al my best, Ann

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2006

Comment from BlackDove

Excellent

I liked this a lot. Your idea of the valley helping love blossom is cute. It's just a cute poem plain and simple. The metaphor was good too. Basically I just loved it. Good poem!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2006

Comment from Snitz

Excellent

Well, I must disagree with some of your reviews.. As I for one am very new to writing and reading all styles of poetry. So I truly appreciate your explaining how the poem is meant and what the words are trying to portray. As there are many meanings to many words, and you shared your meaning, thus showing me the beauty in the poem .. I find it difficult to follow or understand Haiku poetry. This one I did, and I thought it beautiful... Thanks...! Snitz :o)

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2006

Comment from TillMcCauley

Excellent

Alcreator,

This was a lovely Haiku. I really enjoyed reading and pondering it.
keep up the good work.............................................................

Till

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2006

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Very effective haiku...I love the last line...it is innovative and conveys a lovely message. This poetry form is a good brain exercise...to say a lot with just a little...well done...cheyenne

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2006

Comment from Llewelyn

Excellent

Thank you for the explanations. Without these it would have been difficult to review adequately. You have followed the dimensions you have set yourself and produced a pleasant work.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2006

Comment from lydiacalypso

Excellent

hi,
i am glad you gave us your 'key'. it helps. you put alot of thought into this and it works. i love the second line. thanks for sharing. lydia

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2006