AmaZing Animals
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Amazing Animals - W"The A-Z of animals and facts
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow! Now there's some facts of which I was not aware... guess I never took time to get to know them!! ;) Very cool one, Sandra -- and I especially like the fact that the males are respected on the size of their front teeth rather than the size of their.... well, you know - lol!! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Wow! Now there's some facts of which I was not aware... guess I never took time to get to know them!! ;) Very cool one, Sandra -- and I especially like the fact that the males are respected on the size of their front teeth rather than the size of their.... well, you know - lol!! ;) Thanx for sharing, my lady! ;) Yvette :)
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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LOL! LOL! LOL! That was so funny!!!! I'm never going to look at a mans teeth again without thinking you you.Thank you so much for giving me such a laugh! I had to explain it to Graham, LOL! Bless your heart. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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See? I can do comic relief without really using the words... have a great time if it sometimes with my students (although only the really attentive ones catch the 'nuances' once in a while...wink, wink)... so good to 'hear' you smile, my friend!
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That's the best kind of humour, and you are so good at it. :)) xxxx
Comment from Colin John
Hi Sandra, these creatures are just amazing and you have done a fine job here with memories to last me a while now that I have read each section. Sorry none down here in Essex, If I see one I will let you know lol. Cheers Colin x
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Hi Sandra, these creatures are just amazing and you have done a fine job here with memories to last me a while now that I have read each section. Sorry none down here in Essex, If I see one I will let you know lol. Cheers Colin x
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Likewise, I'll let you know if I see one in Southampton waters! 😊
Thank you so much for reading this one, Colin. I've almost finished the alphabet, three letters to go! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :)) Sandra xx
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Yes very good Sandra.xxx
Comment from Veenbee
This reminds me of my trip down the Oragon coast many years ago. We were able to see the sea lion cave and get close the them. Of course behind a fence. I was impressed with their size and how they were able to use the waves to jump onto the rocks they rested on. The were natural surfers.
I found this fact very interesting when you mentioned-When they do want to sleep whilst in the water, they use their tusks as an anchor to hook them onto a rigid piece of ice. - Veenbee
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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This reminds me of my trip down the Oragon coast many years ago. We were able to see the sea lion cave and get close the them. Of course behind a fence. I was impressed with their size and how they were able to use the waves to jump onto the rocks they rested on. The were natural surfers.
I found this fact very interesting when you mentioned-When they do want to sleep whilst in the water, they use their tusks as an anchor to hook them onto a rigid piece of ice. - Veenbee
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review. I'm really pleased it brought back some nice memories. I'd love to see them in their natural habitat, but that's much too far for me to travel. Yes, those tusks come in handy when you are a huge mound of blubber and need to get out of the water. Lol. Thanks again, Veenbee. 😊 Sandra xx
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
Another wonderful poem and entry for the book of amazing animals,
though the sounds they make are eerily similar to snoring. Tusk, tusk, as they say.
When they rear up and point those tusks, it would scare any sensible
polar bear away. It was humorous to see them "roll" back into the water in a film we recently saw, easier to roll than to walk or waddle.
Great extensive notes. Your book may be more like an encyclopedia.
Hope all is well in the UK.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Hello Sandra,
Another wonderful poem and entry for the book of amazing animals,
though the sounds they make are eerily similar to snoring. Tusk, tusk, as they say.
When they rear up and point those tusks, it would scare any sensible
polar bear away. It was humorous to see them "roll" back into the water in a film we recently saw, easier to roll than to walk or waddle.
Great extensive notes. Your book may be more like an encyclopedia.
Hope all is well in the UK.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for another delightful review, Robert, and all the shiny stars. I saw a nature film a while ago and would love to be able to go and see these amazing animals up close in their natural habitat. Too cold for me, unfortunately, it wouldn't help my arthritis. (And I don't think I'll ever be flying again)
Only three to go then I'll be back writing fiction. Have a lovely day, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Sandra xx,
W is for the Walrus - Nice piece of General Non-Fiction having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and transparently depicting characteristics, habits and habitat of the Walruses.
Pictures enhance depth of the theme.
Style and Presentation are notable.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Hello Sandra xx,
W is for the Walrus - Nice piece of General Non-Fiction having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and transparently depicting characteristics, habits and habitat of the Walruses.
Pictures enhance depth of the theme.
Style and Presentation are notable.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for another lovely review, RP, your support throughout has been so encouraging. Have a nice day, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Hi Sandra xx, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Jeff Watkins
This essay is adequate for 12 year, but has some problems.
1. Why discuss size in the first and last paragraph. These paragraphs need to be combined.
2. You have a tendency to use "thiis" as a vague reference or in an awkward construction. In paragraph 3, "this makes." What makes? Suggestion: "The thickness of the skin--four inches--protects them. "This is helpful." What is helpful? Suggestion: Finally, their ability to slow their heart beat allows them, etc. The trick in these situations is to ask your two questions: What is my subject and what does the subject do. Prefer action verbs to linking verbs--is, are, was, were, etc. In paragraph 5, "this makes." What makes?
3. Paragraph 7. In the first sentence locate the subject and have the subject do something.
I hope all of my suggestions make sense to you. (Notice, I did not write "all of this makes sense to you.) Jeff
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This essay is adequate for 12 year, but has some problems.
1. Why discuss size in the first and last paragraph. These paragraphs need to be combined.
2. You have a tendency to use "thiis" as a vague reference or in an awkward construction. In paragraph 3, "this makes." What makes? Suggestion: "The thickness of the skin--four inches--protects them. "This is helpful." What is helpful? Suggestion: Finally, their ability to slow their heart beat allows them, etc. The trick in these situations is to ask your two questions: What is my subject and what does the subject do. Prefer action verbs to linking verbs--is, are, was, were, etc. In paragraph 5, "this makes." What makes?
3. Paragraph 7. In the first sentence locate the subject and have the subject do something.
I hope all of my suggestions make sense to you. (Notice, I did not write "all of this makes sense to you.) Jeff
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Jeff, I'll definitely check your suggestions out. Yes, I did notice the way you wrote your last sentence, lol. :)) Have a good day. Sandra
Comment from elchupakabra
As usual, this piece is on point. Times are tough these days with kids going back to school under covid measures and this is a welcome break from that. Keep up the great work, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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As usual, this piece is on point. Times are tough these days with kids going back to school under covid measures and this is a welcome break from that. Keep up the great work, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for another of your encouraging reviews, my friend. Just three more to go. Have a lovely day! :) Sandra
Comment from RShipp
I was fascinated to learn about using the tusks as anchors to hold them in place as they sleep!
FYI: A Miata Spyder (a sport's car that I love) is smaller and weighs less than a walrus.
I greatly enjoy reading about your animals.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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I was fascinated to learn about using the tusks as anchors to hold them in place as they sleep!
FYI: A Miata Spyder (a sport's car that I love) is smaller and weighs less than a walrus.
I greatly enjoy reading about your animals.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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My goodness! That is small. But I do love little sporty numbers, lol. My first sports car was an MGB, bright red, wonderful! I wish I still had it, it would be worth more than I paid for it now. (50 years ago!)
Back to your review! LOL, yes, I was surprised at what the tusks were used, and for what prestige they had when it came to the length. Thank you for another nice review, my friend, have a lovely day. :)) Sandra x
Comment from Bill Schott
The walrus gets a cool cartoon and a fine poem. A ton and a half of fun with tusks to boot. Love the pictures and data, as well as the video. ................
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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The walrus gets a cool cartoon and a fine poem. A ton and a half of fun with tusks to boot. Love the pictures and data, as well as the video. ................
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Bill, for your lovely review. I'm delighted you enjoyed this one. Three to go! :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Louise Michelle
You did such a nice job putting vital information about the Walrus into your poem. I had no idea they used their tusks for anchorage.
I was amazed to learn how long they can continuously swim, and all that without having a single cup of coffee, haha.
Another top notch job, Sandra. Wonderful pictures and interesting information, as always. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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You did such a nice job putting vital information about the Walrus into your poem. I had no idea they used their tusks for anchorage.
I was amazed to learn how long they can continuously swim, and all that without having a single cup of coffee, haha.
Another top notch job, Sandra. Wonderful pictures and interesting information, as always. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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LOL! You are so funny, Lou, of course they don't stop for coffee, they drink Earl Gray Tea! LOL, LOL.
Thank you so much for your fun review, my friend, and all those shiny stars, you're a diamond and I do so appreciate you! Only three more to go, hope to see you there. Warm hugs! :)) Sandra xxx
